UnionFaps
MaLAguA from patreon
MaLAguA patreon

MC: the marked girl p7

🕑 Added 2024-05-28 14:51:18 +0000 UTC
MC: the marked girl p7

Comments

MaLAguA

Aw thanks ^_^

MaLAguA

Oh... that's serious. Maybe i need to dramatize things more? Because shortening the pace between outloads would mean that the comic would take more time as I'm doing the individual pages (and less comments since everyone just posts at the end)

David Fenger

Nice action sequence, and her stress and panic are well-conveyed... I'm just not feeling it very intensely. Not sure why that is, possibly the pace of releases. "We'll see more next time."

wjd1206

Ooohh! I recognize the outline of that traveler! Acute hearing and strong protective instinct... I think the girl has a chance after all! Love the idea and presentation of the traveller and his ward in shadow/outline. Absolutely fantastic!


More Creators