MaLAguA
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MC: the marked girl p3
🕑 Added 2024-05-10 15:22:53 +0000 UTCThings about to take a turn
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I just realized i didn't post the pages combined in a single post (like i did before). Would that have been preferred? i can still do it
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As per usual, any comment is appreciated. Let me know what you think and what you like/dislike
Let me know what you think
Comments
MaLAguA
Yeah. Suspense builds up. And, i thought as much. I just wonder how it'll go if i post something that has multiple pages. Patreon doesn't have the best of navigation systems. And yeah. It was a bit complicated to organize the thing. I don't have that much practice with paneling, so at times I struggle defining how to order things around... Wonder if people would want me to use a webcomic format (a long piece with the bigger drawings happening along its length)
David Fenger
The suspense builds... Neat look at her inner dialogue in the top half. Individual posts is fine. That way I can 'like' each one... The flow of the last three panels took a moment to decipher, I kind of expected the second from the bottom on the right to be after the tall bottom left panel.
wjd1206
BTW, individual page posts are fine, as long as you stay relatively steady on the post timing (once a week, twice a week, twice a month... whatever you choose)
