UnionFaps
Zarthos from patreon
Zarthos patreon

001 - The Graveyard of the End

🕑 Added 2024-12-08 22:41:13 +0000 UTC
001 - The Graveyard of the End

Comments

Jesse

I agree with the other comments. I think a synopsis would go a long way in getting a sense of the story. I am very interested in a mage story. I wasn't a big fan of all the angst and sneering. Need to see more honestly.

Irakli Jishkariani

Aaah, that is far more interesting than I anticipated

Zarthos

Here's a little backstory on how I envision this world's lore. Since ancient times, magic has been done through contracts with spirits by sacrificing your mana to them, so that they may influence the outside world. The Graveyard of the End isn't linked to necromancy, but just a repository of power—a system that transform dying spirit who have reach the end of their lifespan into pure mana. By swallowing a part of it, MC only gains what he once lacked, mana alone. However, spirits can feel the Graveyard's presence, and can't help but loath the MC in response as the Graveyard is akin to death to them. As such, he must now find a brand new way to acquire magic—one that doesn't rely on spirits. Hence, the Advent of Sorcery.

Irakli Jishkariani

Oh yeah I'm gonna insult necromancy a bit more 😀😀 How can construct of rotting bones contend with magic golem?? I get it memories of deceased but that's just lazy. Magic is associated with exploration in some way. Either application of magic, orogin of magic or foundation, magical forces, magical entities, magical planes. If theres not at least one of them then I don't read it

Irakli Jishkariani

Woow. When I read disability I thought this may be "divine intervention"/"i had op power but didn't know it" Good thing that wasn't. But there are other risks for me. I don't read necromancer novels, it is so overused I gag about reading necromancer. Black magic or bloid magic is meh too. For me magic should be neutral tool character can use any way. Also, I don't read novel if mc has personality corruption or is unreliable narrator (like mental disorder or something or just illness hallucinations and stuff) If it's elemental magic please make it unconventional, especially if it is aggressive element like fire or even worse lightning. It's dull most of the time. Either fireball or fire spear and lightning bolt or fast reflexes. That's why I look for water magic because it forces caster to think unconventionally, if it's not just about ice though. Contracts or dealing with some entities are good but if it requires stupid sacrifices it turns very sour. I have difficulty to swallow mc's stupid actions. That's just my thoughts about it. Either i read it or I don't


More Creators