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Dreams of Home Chapter 71
🕑 Added 2024-04-30 11:44:23 +0000 UTCComments
Beau Brown
Can't wait to hear your final thoughts!
Ellie Vazquez
Holy shit, what a chapter. I know I will finish the story today but I still have so much anxiety about G’s real motives. You did a fantastic job in creating so much tension for the reader. His facial expression’s!!! Are they real, is this the vaunted remorse he died with in canon? I don’t know, but I love that I don’t know yet.
Anthony
oh thank you
Beau Brown
It's on my page!
Anthony
what happened to chapter 70?
Eva Cole
Great chapter! Well his parents are going to be furious
Beau Brown
I've amassed 20 million hits across my stories for a reason. If I didn't know what I was doing none of yall would be paying to read it. Like I told the other guy, let the story finish before you start acting like you know what is going to happen.
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
Yep. Read one time travel fic, and you can start predicting certain events in others lol. Although you gotta be careful around these here parts lol. They don't like discontent being expressed 🤣.
Agom
Ugh. So annoyingly predictable.
Shayna Kasdan
I bet you're real fun at parties...
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
I'll believe you when I see it happen. Unfortunately, I've read thousands of HP stories at this point and it's a recurring theme, even in Time Travel stories. I'm willing to be proven wrong, but until then, this is what experience has taught me.
Beau Brown
Lol you're so wrong it's comical 🤣
Beau Brown
It'd be the same as every other time travel story if I didn't add in some of the "useless angst and drama" 😅
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
Nah. That just opens up the story to yet another angle of useless angst and drama. Enough of that has already been created now.
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
Ah, called it. Of course, after last chapter, you decided you need to go the angst route for your story plot. A lot of authors seem to just LOVE this kind of plot twist. Welp. The month has just started anew, so I guess I'm still in for the next 2 or 3 updates. Let's see how this goes. Useless, unnecessary angst and drama. Edit: we can probably also expect to not see Elaina for the next dozen chapters now, at the least, just because.
TheSerpent
I got a comedy idea sort of of how could play out. Say Gellert is trying to train Elaina and she is ya know carrying on and on about missing Harry and not wanting to do it without him. Gellert pinching bridge of his nose and banging his head against the wall repeatedly from having to deal with this for days if not weeks now til finally he yells "Enough!" and apparates away, finds Harry at maybe Potter Manor or somewhere grabs him saying to the people with him "I need to borrow this" then apparates back to where he and Elaine are staying and all but throws him at Elaina saying "here! happy now?"
TheSerpent
There was me hoping we'd get some of Gellert training Harry and Elaina both, turning them into a power duo. I mean it's not like Gellert couldn't have trained Harry too if he had thought it through, could have had Harry make an unbreakable vow to never attack Gellert in a way that would kill him nor to share the magic with anyone outside of the potential children Harry and Elaina might have one day.
kevin joseph
Time to move on and get a new girl
TheSerpent
See this is why felt Harry shoulda dodged the whole relationship thing. Unneeded and unnecessary drama because now his head ain't gonna be in the game and he'll be worrying about Elaina the whole time. Harry's never been one to set things like relationships aside for the greater good of fighting and defeating the enemy. I mean this is a war. On the battlefield soldiers can't afford to be distracted by thinking about relationships while out in the field, that's how ya get killed with silly distractions like that. Keep your mind on the missions first and foremost, the mission comes first always. Harry shoulda learned that long ago.
TheSerpent
One thing for sure she will not be the same if and when she comes back, shell have changed...for better or worse? We'll find out.
TheSerpent
Gellert would have done well to teach them both the family magic. Harry would be a fool to deny training from a more experience wizard.
TheSerpent
Rather rude of her to just sleep with him then dump him within the same span of time damn near.
TheSerpent
The future is never set, it is fluid, always on motion and we make our own.
Sula
Concidering that Grindelwald is a manipulative self-centric arse, it's likely he would just show her a future that would benefit him the most.
Bruce Parker
Poor Harry he finally gets the girl then the next she's gone. Brilliant chapter as always 👏 👍
Luna Wolf
Sighs I had very good feeling this would end happening. Hopefully the excessive separating of them, and the unneeded drama caused because of this will be sorted out soon and not overly drawn out too long.
