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Burrows Build 0.2 (PC/Mac)
🕑 Added 2021-11-20 22:22:31 +0000 UTCEnjoy! The updates are as follows:
-New Title Screen
-Story Update (Mark Day 2)
-CTC/UI Updates
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1wE3ZXoY8fEKV3E5sWKXt_e5wWoAH4cxv?usp=sharing
Comments
Unagi
There is a part near the end where Mark's goes from his Robe Sprite to his Fully Dressed Sprite without any explanation. There is part where Mark says that is "Sunday" even though the title card says "Monday" "I didn't want to talk about it, but it happened 3 years ago." It is a little weird seeing the number 3 when the word "twenty" appeared a few lines ago.
Unagi
Cajun should be capitalized.
Unagi
Yeah, this happens a lot.
Unagi
I just remembered that Grey uses the word "helicopters" but I don't think those were invented during or before Prohibition.
Yuki
Loved this build! Keep up the great work ♥
Unagi
earshot is one word not two
Unagi
Maybe I haven't been to NYC enough but seeing someone refer to the Empire State Building to a newcomer as "Empire State" seems a little weird.
Unagi
light headed should be hyphenated.
Unagi
"Yes, very observant, Mr.Grey!" There should be a space after "Mr."
Unagi
sugar cubes is two words not one.
Unagi
The Background Noise in the first café scene is considered music when it should be sound.
