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Harry Evans Chapter 81: Vienna calling, woooh, oohhohh

🕑 Added 2024-07-10 04:00:02 +0000 UTC

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bor902

In return for the duelling arc ch being shorter they are coming out faster actually

bor902

Intentional, I was going for obvious cousins or something, but maybe it didn't work that well.

bor902

That makes sense. I also maybe didn't explain it well. Harry also doesn't want the political drama of something he can't prove. After all, they'd have to identify the person in the audience, priori incantatem their wand, etc. Maybe I can rewrite that to be included.

bor902

Been having issues with the units of plot per chapter in the duelling arc. Couldn't identify a fix without a full rewrite

bor902

Yeah the units of meaning in the duelling arc chapters haven't been that easy

Janosch Mainz

Is it intentionally or a mistake that you call the Delacour family Delaflour?

King hand axe

I am disappointed in his reaction to having his mind attacked during his duel. I find it a cop out that the excuse is that he needs experience fight such things. He experienced it, learned he could handle it, now go report it you idiot. As an actual adult, allowing mind altering/ damaging attacks to go unreported/ punished shows a blatant disregard/ disrespect for not only is only safety, his mentors support but also any future competitor who suffer under such a thing, as well as allowing a bribed official to continue makes me dislike your MC. I think this could have been handled better, if he was his actual age, I could see a child not wanting to report something for several reasons but as an adult with critical thinking skills... well, he's acting like a mug and I kinda hope he gets a nasty wake up.

Will Turner

I agree even if little happens I would like it longer. Though I'm also not a writer so I can't really judge just have opinions, and opinions can be great or like the majority not so much.

Levitress

I enjoyed the chapter, but sir could I have another chapter?

Green0Photon

I'm fine with meeting fleur, I'm just killed by the excessive shortness of the chapter 💀 It kinda couldn't appropriately develop any particular purpose. Not enough of cooling off, not enough meeting fleur. Ahhhhh


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