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🕑 Added 2024-03-18 10:40:25 +0000 UTCI wanted to show them kinda joking arround and flirting first so it feels more natural than just jumping straight to the banging. I think this dialogue works but I might feel different when I re-read it in a few days. You can give feedback if it feels off or awkward or something.
In case it's not ovbious, Guy's dick is not actually smaller than Robin's, Eileen is messing with them, but they are both believing her. I thought it would be hotter if Guy's third leg is a surprise to Robin.
Btw I forgot to introduce his name in this page so I'll have to change that later. I could put it on the first panel but I kinda like it silent, so idk.
And i didn't include it in this post but the first page's dialogue is more or less a "Oh hey there, cutie" and then some quick comment that clarifies that they are meeting and not just randomly runningn into eachother.
So a few comments about my thought process for the poses, in case someone's interested. It's mostly basic stuff, I just felt like talking about it haha:
I'm giving Robin this pose that's ment to be a mix of flirty+excited+shy, with her arms behind her back and sticking out her chest a bit (panels 1 and 2, and she does it on page 1 too).
Made Robin a bit shorter in the second panel (compared to the first one) so she feels sort of a bit intimidated between the two other taller figures. Guy and Eileen's poses are more relaxed but Robin still has their attention (resting their arms but leaning forward a bit).
Robin nervously touching her face in panel 3, in reaction to Eileen's joke/confrontation.
Panel 4, arms crossed as if he's putting his foot down on the matter. A "closed pose" since he's disagreeing with them. Robin subconsciously mimics his pose (panel 5), crossing her arms as she's going along with his joke. And he opens up his pose a bit and leans forward in return, as he's now agreeing.
Panel 6, Eileen: "aggressive pose", Robin: with shoulders down (doesn't know what to do with her arms as Eileens sudden banter comment catches her offguard), Guy: agrees with her but his pose says he's not worried because he knows it's not true.
Panle 7, the POV is a bit low to reflect how she's feeling confident since she now knows something they don't. Relaxed pose, leaning back and resting arm.
Panels 8 and 9, Robin si more surprised, kinda waiting for his reaction since she thinks Eileen revealed something embarrasing about him, while he's just impressed. Also they are on opposite sides of their respective panels since they're supposed to be looking at eachother.
Last panel, Guy has his arms resting on the table like he's putting his offer on the table, and Robin is just doing the classic arm grabbing/flirt-laughing.
Comments
RockFish
Ooh that’s a clever little twist. I’m excited for the pay off
