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Finished page 9
🕑 Added 2023-10-18 23:42:47 +0000 UTCLike someone pointed out in a previous post, this page is arranged in a kind of chaotic way so it conveys the panic state of Robin. Panels go over eachother and bubbles go over panel separations. And I was worried this would make it hard to read.
But I think in the end I managed to make the page readable while still chaotic, except for the one speech bubble in the top right that's honestly poorly positioned. As I illustraded in the third image, the eye will probably naturally skip it. So I used the light reflection on the phone screen to draw a diagonal line from "I have something for you now" to the top right bubble and maybe it kinda helps guide the eye? But anyways, I don't think it's that big of an issue since it's not a super important peace of dialogue. And fixing it at this point would be pretty annoying.
Also, I don't know why I make my life harder by giving all these tatoos to Eileen. She's gonna be clothed pretty often in future comics haha.
EDIT: I just realized I forgot to add an emoji next to Eileen's top center message, "why?".
EDIT 2: I added the emoji and tweaked some of the lighting.
