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Nero Walker, Book 4 Ch.50 (281)

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 23:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Davo Galbraith

It's now time for Nero to go back to the estate, grab a few books and lie in bed for a few days... Just refuse to move and kick out anyone even suggesting he gets up

HereForHFY

I totally agree on the cliché part, it can be done well but then it has to be done over the top for comedic purposes, in a story that is as cliché as the characters, and that is a rare bird indeed. What I really don't like is when you as the reader get the feeling that the author suddenly realised that there was information missing for the reader to enjoy something new or decided to add something out of the blue, and they cast Summon Exposition Man just to lore dump. Here all the characters portrayed are already established, and have ongoing lives we get to visit to learn stuff Nero doesn't know.

Leetle Sheet

Thanks. The different perspectives and what people care about are things that make a story fun for me when I'm reading them. I hate reading stories where every character is a cliche'd example of a recognizable personality type without depth. People aren't simple, and what makes them different is how they see things. I like crazy people to have a reason to be crazy, and for people to make assumptions that only make sense to them. It should be rare for a character to understand others and to play them like a fiddle... that's not a common thing for people to be able to do. Regardless, I'm really happy that you like how I'm throwing in the other viewpoints. I've been putting in a lot of though into who knows what, along with what each character cares about. Thanks for your support!

ThoMiCroN

All those lives lost just because Nero couldn’t be here to resurrect them on time…

HereForHFY

I'm not usually a fan of too many different viewpoints when the story has a clear MC, but you do it well and it maintains Nero's cluelessness while letting the reader in on some of the happenings behind the scenes so the result is :chefs_kiss:.

Alexis Cassaigne

Thanks for the chapter!


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