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201 The Futility of Predicting a Fool

🕑 Added 2024-08-10 00:00:01 +0000 UTC

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ImmovableMage

Thanks for pointing it out! I've rephrased it.

Storyhunter

Possible edit needed.... "He admittedly didn’t know much about the Lich Kingdoms’ military tactics, but the use of magic narcotics, mana curses, and nightmarish monsters all hinted at a fondness of eroding morale before a fight. No matter which, either would help his foolish plan." The above phrase "no matter which" Followed by the word either... Is confusing. As the prior sentence has a 3 part tactics list and a single operational goal. The operational goal seemed to condence the whole tacts set at the end of the sentence. If you decide to publish this could use a solid pass.

BeauZoe

This is THE image I see when I picture the Immovable Mage. A man standing between 2 armies, a living battle line through which no being can cross, staunch and outwardly zen like, juggling hundreds of threats while remaining a simply unstoppable force. At home he is another person entirely. :)

Storyhunter

That's a bit wild. So he decided to go out and ask the vampires to dance with him. While boulders rained down. It's a shame they didn't appreciate the invitation. 😁👌


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