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A Step Too Far - Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2023-05-10 02:51:26 +0000 UTC

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horuvex

A double-dose of shrinking is definitely a challenge for Teddy! Glad you enjoyed the surprise.

Deano592

Great chapter, shrinking twice in rapid succession. Wow that’s a turn of events. He’ll be rabbit sized in no time. Would be fun to see the girls chase him down and bring him back struggling and squirming

horuvex

Hi there. The next chapter is fully written/drafted. But I still need to do a pass-over on it before it post, because I have...standards I guess, haha. That said, June is a very busy month for me as I currently work on contract and have a contract that lasts until the end of the month. There will be a chapter out in the next few days, but it just means I have to squeeze erotica writing in where I can. I think you'll enjoy the next chapter as well.

jsm109

Hi, hope all is well! Will you be posting another chapter in June? You left off at such an awesome part.

Kokoji

Ohhh, i just reread the chapter and you're 100% right. Her response wasn't as frantic as I thought. She was actually more concerned with getting off! Man you've done an amazing job with her character.... I am so excited to see how this unfolds and the dynamics of the family.

horuvex

Haha. I have been fortunate to have him render one of my stories in the past. KryptonLives is also gradually rendering one of my very very old stories. Several other artists have certainly also done some one-off works based on Nexifem Inc. and other stories in the past. I always appreciate it when my writing inspires spin-off art like that. I take it as a compliment for sure.

horuvex

Well, we'll see what happens. I don't know how worried she really was considering how she shouted after Teddy when he ran. No worries. I am glad the story is inspiring your imagination.

Bob Bobberson

An OHH rendering of this story would be the greatest thing ever to happen to anyone anywhere.

Kokoji

Hahaha, I thought so! I love that she's greedy! I also had a feeling she might stay in line and be an enforcer rather than a mutineer considering her reaction to hearing the car. But hey, greedy people always want more... I'm glad it's at least something you've considered! Thank you for the reply btw!

horuvex

Thank you Abraxas. :)

Abraxas

Outstanding work! You have definitely taken it up a level.

horuvex

Vivianne is indeed the largest woman in the house at this point. She got a bit greedy. As to your second question, I am not sure. Well, actually I have thought about it, but won't give that away here yet. Vivianne did seem to realize she was doing something not quite permissible when she heard her mother coming home. So you can speculate based on that.

horuvex

Thanks, stevebasic. You'll just have to stay tuned to find out. Those are all very reasonable questions though!

horuvex

Haha, thanks! Don't worry, at my snail pace these days, you'll be done rendering like three stories or something before I get to the end. I am glad you are enjoying it. I didn't realize you were still a subscriber.

horuvex

Haha. You joke, but I actually considered making this whole story a riff on Cinderella at one point! This chapter is a bit of a critical juncture indeed.

horuvex

Many thanks! :)

Jona

Loved this chapter, brilliant work!

jsm109

Is this where his fairy godmother shows up? jk jk. This definitely ramped up. Looking forward to life at their sizes and even different ones down the line :)

Oscar H Harrington

goddamn this chapter was incredible. So good you make me want to start rendering the whole damn story! Please stop! I have too much to do already!

stevebasic

Great great chapter. From his time w Morganna in the bathroom to his face between V’s thighs, he seemed to be slowly - if not accepting - coming to terms with the reality of his new lot in life. But now he’s run away! Will they hunt for him like an animal or will he be drawn back to the house out of hunger and fear? Looking forward to the next chapter already!

Kokoji

Man, this chapter was well, well worth the wait! Is Vivianne the largest now? Do you think there'd ever be dissension in the ranks?


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