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Learning Lessons 3 of 8: Caught in the Act // Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2024-12-15 02:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Ryan

SPOILER: I ended up reading the rest of this story on kindle once I figured out it the whole thing was available. I’m realizing that I might not be the target audience for your writing KT. I was STRESSED out the entire time over how Jessy and Pete would end up back together. I was almost sure they would but then I remembered I about threw my phone through the wall when I finished the Maggie story and found out how sad of ending that story had for Max…. But anyways I was stressed but convinced everything would work out, and it did but! I was just so dissatisfied with Pete and Jess’s ending. She don’t own up to anything to Pete. I’m guessing by the tears and shaking on her door step she’s happy to have him back but I don’t think she ever REALLY felt like she lost him and so many things were said (Tyler told Pete about how Jesse was going to dump him, and then she does and then the only reason they don’t work out is because Pete rips them apart in the end) Jesse is by far my least favorite wife in your universe now beating Maggie and I forget her name from the separate schools series (which I really hope is still in the plans to finish) anyways I was dissatisfied because we never see Jesse own up to the shit she pulled in all of this. She was NOT solely at fault for everything that happened but she was evil and conniving and selfish and just mean to Pete plenty of times and I knew he would take her back but he never grew a fully functioning spine and didn’t put her in a position to have to own up to her parts in all of this and worse that Jesse never owned up to her shit on her own. I loved the book Learning Lessons, it was a great read and had me HOOKED. But I was extremely dissatisfied by the ending. Sorry KT still a huge fan of yours.

Bill F Protagoras

“The only way to get rid of temptation is to yield to it. Resist it, and your soul grows sick with longing for the things it has forbidden to itself..." Although we have Oscar's own fate to measure against his aesthetic yardstick... it does seem plausibly disappointing for the butterfly to be broken upon the wheel. Perhaps a cruel historical sample of being too clever for one's own good... It could be said that OW's 'soul' was not broken by the harshness of the Victorian penal system but his health underwent a fearsomely brutal drubbing that a time traveling insurance actuary might have assessed for shortening and severely reducing the quality of his untimely declining years.

JamesIsAsleep

I forgot that Jess jilled off in a grocery store. Imagine being that hot that you have women lusting over you in the baking section ... Well done Tyler.


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