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Embracing Ellie: Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2024-09-23 20:52:20 +0000 UTC

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JamesIsAsleep

Elie had the perfect reaction to being accused of flirting with Hemi, "who me?" I love that, particular because it seems genuine in her adamance that she was not. Fun start!

Bill F Protagoras

And the UK... most emigration to NZ is relatively recent historically speaking... It wasn't a prison colony like Australia was at first... It was a gradual process... It's your shout is still commonplace throughout the UK.

KT Morrison

Whoops! Is it too late to make the claim they were in the marching band back at Sweetwater High?

KT Morrison

Haha—thanks! I watched a video on Youtube that was quite fun. I've never been to NZ, but some of the lingo is similar to parts of Canada.

KT Morrison

I'm aiming for this to be 12 chapters. I won't start new long projects or series until I finish the others. So this will be a novella, a one and done.

Bill F Protagoras

Yeah, but as is her wont KT is dropping enigmatic breadcrumbs like... "Those are the whispers from the scariest part of your past..." also!

Bill F Protagoras

Judging from the attractive images of Ellie, and is it Hemi(?), combined with Danny's perky instincts and the eloquence of KT's engaging prose... I suspect it would be an error to underestimate the persuasive power of pheromones! Also it seems the past is, as usual, always with us! And by us I mainly mean 'them'! Lots of deft exegesis unobtrusively slipping in under the radar.

Z

The story’s picking up pace; IMHO, it feels a bit rushed that they’re becoming amigos. What’s the common topic or interest that bonds the three so quickly—sports like American football or the Rugby World Cup, similar ages, traveling? Is Hemi exchanging notes with the couple about visiting the States, sparking the conversations? Would we get to hear the phone conversation between Daniel and Hemi? KT: How many chapters are you thinking for the final form of the novel?

Tracey52

Hemi knows the deal though

Tracey52

I love KT that you know what a “shout” is. Great research.

Bill F Protagoras

Another intriguing Morrison mystery... A who-knows-it?

Bill F Protagoras

She slumped, perplexed, looking away. “I mean, if I did, I don’t know that I did, Danny. I swear.”

Bill F Protagoras

“But, you meet a guy like Hemi, and maybe you start to think, or wonder, I guess, what it might be like with, uh, a-another man.” She scoffed. “No, I don’t, Daniel. I don’t think like that.”

Bill F Protagoras

"Ellie and Danny, Global Prom King and Queen.” How extra-ordinary!

Bill F Protagoras

"And when his tongue rooted out her fattened pink pearl, the moan became a high cry." Fattened pink pearl! A good'un!

Bill F Protagoras

"They would go back to the lodge now and give that big tuba whirl," Error They would go back to the lodge now and give that big tub a whirl.


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