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DITW 14-7: Odyssey 2

🕑 Added 2024-04-13 22:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Bill F Protagoras

"She withdrew the pillow from Hyun’s lap and held it in her own now, easing away from Hyun, going to her corner as if an unseen referee had ordered her to do so." As well as being an excellent Morrison metaphor for Kimmy's inner conflict and the uncomfortable movement and tension the confession is causing the couple, the unseen referee is an apt representation of the occult machinations of Kimmy's own hidden judgement.

Andrew Mellein

I know but we have future Separate Schools books!

Donkatsu

Unfortunately for Harrison, no such MILF experience occurred.

Andrew Mellein

Would it be wrong of me to imagine Taylor’s mom giving Harrison a helping hand😉😉

Andrew Mellein

Taylor sure as hell can’t abide Harrison getting a bj from April. But as for herself she can have it all🤣🤣

Donkatsu

I liked especially how Taylor went from demure to obsessed and crazed in about two hot seconds. Another one of these north woods lakeside parties - what's up with you folks from the Great White North? Also, Taylor's mom is really hot.

Andrew Mellein

Just read Seperate Schools. Loved it! I think I like it more than Maggie and Keely and they both cover college.

Andrew Mellein

I think Devlin had to get something from Kimmy. He gifted her a new car and had to wear her panties. It had to be something devious. And I dont think Josh is going to like it!

Pete

I was reflecting on what might have happened further with Devlin. Did it end with Kimmy getting him into panties, or did he bend to her will even further? Even if it's just the former, I wonder if Kimmy might transpose her enjoyment of humiliating Josh to Devlin? I mean in a more permanent way.

Andrew Mellein

You got me there KT (LOL!)

Bill F Protagoras

It was a carefully delineated incident... buzzing like a fly.

KT Morrison

Sorry, that was a girl; one of the two standing girls dancing in place beside the hot tub. Doesn't rule anything out though, now does it? :)

Andrew Mellein

Am I reading to much into Quinn flirting with the guy with the straw cowboy hat and puffing a cigarette together or is that just me? Maybe its another Rumble incident where it doesn't add up. I just cant be sure with KT's writing because little incidents become bigger down the road. I always think of Chekov's gun.

Kat

Please, please, please let Kimmy find out about all of this! Lol

Kat

I agree! But, we can’t be too sure. KT might have something else in mind. I’m liking seeing Josh in a different environment. He needs to be treating himself better. This is Kimmy’s mess to clean up. That’s not to say that I want her to fail, but it’s time she takes responsibility for the situation they’re in.

Andrew Mellein

Josh and Meyer are going to freak and it’s going to be glorious reading about it!

Andrew Mellein

He and Kimmy should definitely have some form of ground rules especially after Devlin. But I could see Josh’s kink eventually evolving to hot wife situations. The reason he freaked out at Hazelton was Devlin and Kimmy admitting to an affair behind his back. But I could see Josh with or without Kimmy in a similar situation but without Devlin to taunt him.

Pete

Right. Josh needs to get very clear on which parts of his kink he still likes and craves. Let's say he recreates his 'game' with a new girl. Every time they have sex, as she cums, he asks her to imagine that she's cumming with a man who resembles Devlin. It won't take a rocket scientist to predict that she'll soon crave actual sex with that kind of man. In short, there's a real risk of a deeper tragedy here: that Josh blows up his marriage with Kimmy, only to recreate a nearly identical situation with his next partner. Josh's problem isn't Devlin, and it isn't just Kimmy. It's also, and perhaps mostly, himself.

Kat

Josh hasn’t told him outright, but Meyer has been putting the pieces together. He knows now. He’s realizing that it had to be something very bad, like cheating, for Josh to launch a chair at his high school bully. Wait until he finds out what Hyun has been doing with Kimmy.

Kat

That would be great. In her mind, she says it would be devastating to think of Josh moving on with another woman, but maybe she needs visual proof of that. :)

Andrew Mellein

I want to see that happen Kat! The next chapter Kimmy's at Hyun's she see her phone and Josh's location pops up after he turns of his FindMyPhone link and she totally freaks out! (LOL!)

Bill F Protagoras

Well, we know for sure it won't be what Kimmy claimed to have finally 'revealed'... and Kimmy left her with the impression she had fessed up... so Kimmy really made her own bed... right! Karina will presume Josh knows everything she does...

Andrew Mellein

Kimmy did all those things without him (with Devlin) and lied about. That's where her and his problem is. But your right Josh gets his kink from suffering and imaging his wife is cheating on him.

Andrew Mellein

Would that be what she saw of Kimmy at Tiffanys?

JL23

There are ways to have that where you feel like you are doing it together, as partners with your eyes wide open. And its OK to want that, its part of what Kimmy wants him to admit. Even if I think she's wrong/somewhat delusional on a lot of things, on that point she isn't wrong. There's a way for Josh to have those desires and not feel the way he does right now with Kimmy. It may happen with Kimmy, it may not. And he shouldn't feel bad or self conscious or embarrassed about that part.

Pete

There's a saying: 'You take your problems with you.' Even if Josh divorces Kimmy, he is who he is: a guy who gets incredibly turned on by the idea of his girl being unfaithful.

Bill F Protagoras

Perhaps Karina has something much more incriminating to divulge.

Kat

This story is so good. One new chapter is never enough. I’m glad Josh stayed away from Kimmy, and went to Meyer’s. He’s realizing that life could go on without her. I so wish someone would send Kimmy a picture of Josh in the hot tub surrounded by women, especially Karina. She’d definitely lose it, especially when his FindMyPhone is turned off.

Bill F Protagoras

Me too... Devlin seemed so smug about his henchman's lust cage! Maybe the PI is not reliable outside his specialised field.

JL23

It's something of an allegory for the "old" Josh vs the "new" Josh. The old Josh didn't want to confront things directly, and would prefer someone else to do the "dirty" work, where the "new" Josh did it himself and found out the world didn't end. I could see that realization perhaps leading him back to Kimmy, but also perhaps leading him further away.

Andrew Mellein

Does Meyer know Kimmy cheated on Josh? I get the sense he does know now after Josh is constantly sleeping over at his house. And this Devlin revelation would likely point to Kimmy's lover!

Andrew Mellein

I so want Josh to use FindMyPhone ping his location! (LOL!) I so want Kimmy to freak out and get jealous for a change. And she would too as demonstrated two chapters ago when she thought of Josh being content and in love with some other woman!

Andrew Mellein

Funny Chris that you mention it. I think a lot of Josh problems stem from being a borderline alcoholic. I think it may have manifested due to his grief over Kimmy's miscarriage. If he was never stone cold drunk during Tiffany's this series would probably never exist. And he would have been there to stop Kimmy and Devlin from doing the almost nasty in the grass and the bathroom!

Chris K

It would be fun to see a reaction if some pics surfaced...

Bill F Protagoras

On the bright side... looks like Jonny Rumble is still available for Josh bashing! It took just this to remind us you can still excel at prose that does not involve the involuted coils of crushing anguish... but is textured and like a siren song...

Chris K

Also, telling us what he thinks of his once sweet mouse.

Chris K

Careful with the Jim Beam Josh! We all know how this shit started...

Bill F Protagoras

Is Kimmy going to tell her tales of the struggle to defend the camp when the enemy was pushing against the siege? The duels of champions... or much much worse...

Andrew Mellein

Also like how that minor mystery of Rumble that I theorized on was put to rest.

Andrew Mellein

I was with Josh on this one. I thought Devlin fucked Rumble's wife. I guess we're both wrong (LOL!) I kind of wanted to see Rumble beat up Devlin. It looks like to me Josh is seriously considering or contemplating divorcing Kimmy in this chapter. I think the next chapter is going to be good. We are going to see what Kimmy told Hyun about her troubles!

Bill F Protagoras

"In the enduring absence of support, he’d been in free fall, and now here he was somehow landed in a stuntman’s air bag." Another acute Morrison metaphor...

Bill F Protagoras

"Meyer now realizing what it would take for a guy like Josh Waters to pick up a chair and strike someone with it." This is the sensitive, sensible Meyer, knowing when to take the piss and when to be tactful...

Bill F Protagoras

"It was just that Kimmy had given him something before even looking if it was on his wishlist. It counted as betrayal, even if she could rationalize it all away." I am glad to see this point remains equivocal to Josh...

Bill F Protagoras

“Looks like you got me stuck in this hellhole.” Hohoho!

Bill F Protagoras

"A harmless look at how revenge might form. Living well, as they say. Facebook pictures of him with some buxom young single mom with two kids, a soft and pretty girl, one with lots of ink on her arms and the small of her back, but maybe one who was a great cook, or an artist of some kind. Kimmy would erupt in flames." Typical of you, KT giving people what they want but not so much it might spoil them... or anything else.

Bill F Protagoras

"a snapshot of his current circumstance sent to one cunning lawyer who lived in his apartment right now would send that dragon into apoplexy." Great to savour Josh's dry humour once more...

Bill F Protagoras

"But Quinn could be a partner for Meyer, someone for Meyer to look forward to coming home to. Soft, feminine, comforting. Quinn wouldn’t break away and lead a charge up a hill like some demonic force suddenly consumed with an unknown bloodlust. Leave Meyer behind, or worse, command him to follow." Just the right admixture of admiration and sweet envy.

JL23

One mystery solved: why did Josh hire the PI? Plenty more questions to go. Also good to see Josh realizing that life would ultimately go on if he decided to end the marriage. It would be painful, but it wouldn't be the end of him. Now, he needs to determine if he wants to move on or not.


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