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Summer Swap 6-16

🕑 Added 2024-02-11 20:30:17 +0000 UTC

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Bill F Protagoras

I must admit to having absolutely no inkling of what KT was going to do with the oddly stoic Arlo, and the wicked delight which is Lily... Puck with a penchant to playfully chastise rather than torment.

Bill F Protagoras

I now realize with the return of Paloma this could be a modern Decameron... but happily it isn't. Boccaccio used the the lock up of ten young people, seven women and three men, as an excuse to tell stories for ladies, according to author. Summer Swap on the other hand is a story about ten young people spiced with mischief, humour, protean sensuality and lewdly ludic fun that gradually reveals saucy new truths to the friends at the same as they are revealed to the readers. The whole narrative up to now seems playful and teasing flavoured with a hint of jeopardy, and I catch the odd unthreatening whiff of angst... we will see what we shall see... but as the gang now seems made up of married couples the comedy in the classical sense is already built in, but more importantly in what she has offered it exceeds what the author promised.

Bill F Protagoras

I liked the broken parallel of the docking... between Phillippe and Cody it became a comedy of male dominance but between Lily and Chey it became a surprise erotic merging of two very different characters. The greatest irony being that the greater comic challenge to Cody as ringmaster is Lily. Arlo and Lily, or should it rather be Lily and Arlo, the serious couple who prove that appearances can be deceptive... and that as far as being ordinary goes the joke is on the other friends!

L_S87

LOL! I literally thought exactly that when it happened. It flew off and I instantly thought, "she did that on purpose, what does she have pre-planned on that phone "app" that was conveniently already "downloaded"." And now here she is, shoving her tongue enthusiastically down Chey's throat while giving her the mother of all gropes. Yes, she has plans, Arlo is just enjoying watching his mischief maker work and is along for the ride. Everyone else? Pawns. I can't wait to see where this goes, hopefully it ends with both quartets working their issues out. I wouldn't be surprised if Lily has a plan for that too!

KT Morrison

I believe Lily is in complete control of this game. Like, did the spinner even really break, ha ha?

L_S87

Oh, that ending! Can't wait to see what Byron thinks of that, if Chey's paranoid worry is true. Unlikey, but possible, i think. I find it more than a little bit ironic that Chey, of all people, would lecture Byron on saying what he thought. I think it would have done her better if it had been Carla, in the realm of working out the jealousy issues she has while also helping her and Byron potentially have something more meaningful with Cody and Carla. But this is much more intriguing, seeing Lily open up and show her true self to everyone, when at least some of them see her as a totally different person. Where the games go from there could be quite spectacular. Plus, if Chey is saying she likes this more than she ever thought she would, perhaps she'll be interested in doing something similar in private with Carla for their two boys. Cant wait for the next chapter. Love what you're doing with this, KT!

Tracey52

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