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Chapter Seventy-three

🕑 Added 2021-11-22 15:30:12 +0000 UTC

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Kemizle

Could he get a class that allows him to bind a familiar? Then look for a monster that has natural blood magic. Then he could use blood magic through it to supplement his manipulation. The opposite of Elaine’s cousin giving his blood different effects that will apply to his armor and weapons he makes

Kemizle

The ground could’ve collapsed and he found himself in the caves confused his canister of blood trapped under boulders and his weapon broken. Then he gets swarmed and fight valiantly killing as much as he can before he succumbs to the mob

Blaine

Loved this until the end. Seems super forced. What about having him be smothered under bodies and lose consciousness or something? The "captured by new enemy, learn something, escape somehow, grow" is getting overused.

Jeremy Patrick

I disagree. The author makes it seem like the mc is getting to be a badass then he somehow gets knocked out super easily. And it keeps happening. Like there wasnt much resistance in this encounter at all. It was a plot needed knockout. Not something where his ability as a fighter failed him. At least thats how it felt to me.

Kemizle

I don’t feel sorry for him. It’s not the writing it’s his character if that makes any sense. Why would he even fight all those?

Jeremy Patrick

lol poor dude just keeps getting kidnapped


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