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Blood Shaper Chapter Forty-five

🕑 Added 2021-09-22 14:42:03 +0000 UTC

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BladeTytan

We really need a Discord for this stuff. New Class/Skill idea. Sense Blood: Allows Kay to sense living ("blooded") being within range, also allows for better Blood Manipulation and potentially manipulating blood without needing it to be within sight. After the Class acquisition another idea i had was that that Class'd be involved in the eventual Class Evolution/Tier 5 Class that'd let Kay inspect people, or at least guess-timate their levels/stats/Classes/Focus (Mage, Warrior, ect.) Idk how much of what i suggested for Sense Blood is within Blood Manipulation, but it's an idea and this'd be a good time in the story to train for that kind of detection.

Sammot

Dragon rider class sounds cool! Maybe it could develop into some kind of dragon blood manipulator.

William Mileham

I have no real concrete plans for any romance or lack thereof for this story. There are potential ideas floating around in my head, but nothing is set in stone, or even close to that. Will there be a harem? I don't think so, but worldbuilding on a political level means it could happen. Will there be people vying for Kay? No idea. Nothing is planned for that specific kind of thing, so we'll see what happens as I advance the story.

Jason Bryant

Tftc, Love the story, but the vibe I’ve been getting recently is a little off-putting; While sexuality is a HUGE aspect in most intelligent beings’ lives, there are writers out there who do it wrong, in excess, or in ways that are not needed or are plain annoying. Our MC is a man from Earth that trusts easily and has been called out for it. Typically Earthlings in Isekai novels make bonds quickly, and you can see that with Eleniah and Murunel. Eleniah is a(hot, Kay’s own words) dark(?) elf with excruciating loneliness and attachment issues. Murunel, from the little we’ve seen, is being setup to be the bubbly, happy go lucky side kick. So, we have the Tsundere and the upfront in your face personalities. This story seems like it might devolve into a harem builder. Which is not the way to go, at all. On the other hand, we my not have any more female characters recruited into his merry trio of adventurers, and only the two current women will vie for Kay’s attention. All the while he’s oblivious. All of this is completely hypothetical and subjective, but, I’ve read too many Webnovels that start out really nice, but are ruined in the ways I’ve presented. Romance isn’t inherently bad, but you have to do it right, or not at all. This story has potential to be great and is shaping up really nice! I just feel like writers need put a lot of thought into how the romantic sub plots should not intrude or derail the MC’s goals and the main storyline.


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