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comic wip 1

🕑 Added 2019-06-24 01:24:05 +0000 UTC

Comments

Fortress120

Where can I find your comics?

Lictor000

Maybe you could had a little arrow to guide the reader through those panels if you want to keep the page composition

Lupinator

Panel 1 is a POWERFUL pose.

Furrygamer

Amazing work as always

Perry Beans

I think the panel sizes need some adjustment to naturaly lead the eyes, my eyes went from 1 to 4 and then 2-3, otherwise looking forward to this <3

Whiffy Plush

I look forward to seeing more of these two. I've gotten a little attached to them! Numbers are looking great, by the way. Thank you so much for making this Cherri.

IamUnknown

I read it 1-4-3-2, maybe swap where 4 and 3 are?

Rawk Manx

looking great so far!

Nathan Smith

Looks amazing and I can't wait to see more of it. As for the top panels it is in a rather odd position in terms of eye movement. Naturally the eye would want to go in an upside-down N or Z pattern when reading the first four panels.

M2

Best couple is back!! 😁

PrincessSamoyed

I'd say maybe the switch between 3 and 4 would be good but aside from that, everything looks good to me. Also Apollo's tail wag is adorbs!!!

Richie-Rich

AHH IT BEGINS!! I can't wait to see more of this already, we're starting off great!! ✨ and the only thing I could see happening is someone going from panel 1 to 4 by accident