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[Tree] Chapter 489: Tainted Beast Core

🕑 Added 2025-07-16 15:05:47 +0000 UTC

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The Golem Crafter

I agree with is 100%

Ringo SK

Neither. She is from an island looking for an artifact to grow stronger.

Sam Hayman

Just rereading and had a thought is ray (the new girl) a mortal given cultivation or a celestial empire spy?

Shannon

So as many have pointed out here already, you appear to have completely forgotten who sam is, and the interactions he's had with Jasmine. First, he's only used beast cores once, right before the tournament. And he was hesitant to do it. At no other point has Sam shown interest in gaining and using beast cores. Following the last mystic realm, he was given resources by Jasmine, so he shouldn't feel lacking resources. His entire behaviour has come out of nowhere. He also knows Jasmine's personality is not the same as Stella's personality, and he has a rivalry with Jasmine, so his approach to dealing with her would be as his rival, not "as the disciple of" the slaughter princess. The importance of this, especially concerning his attitude regarding beast cores, is when he was talking smack following the mystic realm, he commented about how expensive pills are, not how expensive beast cores are. And Ash has never commented, the times hes looked at him, on him corrupting himself with beast cores. All in all, it probably should have been Hugo who decided to use the beastcore and who spoke to Jasmine the way Sam did. It would make far more sense based on what's been established. Do you not keep a word doc or something to keep notes of what happens in each chapter? No one's memory is perfect in regard to remembering every little detail, but such a monumental error as this chapter makes the chapter feel like it is a ChatGPT chapter, not your usual quality. There is so much drift here it's not funny. And while these side chapters might be fun for you to write, and they make the world feel more lived in, like things happen outside whatever the main cast does, I don't feel they do more than act as filler. For example: It would have been more expansive, and perhaps more keeping in character with Sam, if Sam and his friends, after collecting some corpses, came across Jasmine engaging in slaughter with the bugs. Thinking Jasmine was being overwhelmed by the number, Sam charges in to try to help his rival and do something that might get Stella's attention. His friends follow to help him. They ultimately get overwhelmed by the bugs, and Jasmine needs to save them. Realising that she's 'too far ahead' he decides to use one of the beast cores. *insert whatever the consequences are* That would have been more in keeping with how you typically structure your events, it would have been in keeping with Sam's actions and personality as established so far, and would have overall left a better impression with readers for keeping in line with both your narrative style so far and the character's personality and motivations.

InfernoDroid

Hey Karn, do you remember that jasmine have Sam a spacial ring FULL of resources so it wouldn't feel like he was being held back because of them, so they could be actual rivals

InfernoDroid

Karn seems to have forgotten a lot about Sam imo. For awhile Douglas was taking an interest in him, but not anymore

DeadHydromancer

Tyftc, glad to see these side stories it really expands the world out as you said and Im hoping Stella or someone notices Sam or he just gets "lucky" and gains power in his own right. Excited to see todays chapter 😁

Kai

I would normally agree, but the Sam in this chapter isn’t the same Sam we know. He doesn’t act or think like he did before. Doing beast cores is completely out of character for him (as long as he has cultivation resources.). And his behavior is off. He knows Jasmin, she even gave him cultivation resources, yet he acts and thinks like they’ve never met. Considering that she already supported him, he shouldn’t even need beast cores. It feels like the author forgot who Sam is wich causes Sam to contradict his prior mindset.

XKARNATION

Haha that’s totally fair

Justice League

I think the Sam-fatigue is partly because we are all excited to watch Ashlock EAT the beast-tide.

Kurpophobic

Love the side chapters but Sam is just not it for me

Quinn

I like Sam, kids got a lot of potential. He’s not that important or impressive as of now. But I think he’ll give a good example of what the capable and dedicated non inner circle members are able to achieve

Daniel is ŁØNE

Same, he isn't a bad character just not my cup of tea tbh that said I do appreciate how he gives a look into the lives of the lower rung cultivators of the sect even if he himself doesn't appeal to me on a personal level.

Max W.

I don’t mind side chapters but Sam is probably the most boring character in the entire story imo

StormTheSquid

Not sure how I feel about the side chapters in general, but I like this one. I think it's moreso the same issue as needing to wait a week for a new episode of an anime and it focuses on the B plot in stead of the A plot. When there's more to binge it'll be fine but as it's coming out it feels a little off ya know? Still like this particular one tho.

joe obrien

I think it would be cool and funny to see Douglas take a liking to Sam and start teaching him a thing or two and when stela see this, she gets jealous and steals Sam as her second apprentice

Drew

Gotta be honest, I'm not vibing with Sam.

SteveS

Love the side POVs. Really builds the world.

GreatCabbage

I am also a mega fan of the side chapters, always done very well Thanks for the chapter!

Black Rose

I like the interludes

Konwa

Will we be hearing about Jasmine and Stella’s monster companions? Any plans to have them evolve up the ladder?

Ethan Barrow

TFTC!! I wonder just how many pills Jasmine has on her actually, lol.

phantom

I give Sam credit here. He is an earth cultivator who just chugged down a beast core beyond him. yet still was considering retreat.

Nic Peacock

At the beginning of the ch I said to myself “Jasmine better come get her man or Ray is going to steal him away” and then low and behold she showed up

Kennyevilmonkey

Hopefully he can get those pills. Don't want our boy Sam getting left too far behind.

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! Sam being a bit of an idiot here, taking beast cores without first having a pill available...

Beeees!

Tftc!! Started as rivals but soon to be friends?!? Even is its one sided lol

Noodle Man

TFTC! Looks like Jasmine and Sam are teaming up and becoming closer. Although Sam buddy maybe you should stop with those beast cores before you go cuckoo crazy

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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