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[Tree] Chapter 430: Yummy Bugs

🕑 Added 2025-02-14 14:39:45 +0000 UTC

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Victor DoUrden

More like saw fear in its posture then in its eyes. Saying eyes don't make sense

lp

Ashlock has Larry, Diana has Kaida, Stella has Maple, and Guppy, Jasmine gets Mantis, Douglas have Mudcloaks. I am seeing a patern here. Maybe soon enough Larry will have a lot of beast under him who surrender.

lp

Maybe, but I think Stella being calm have to do more with her getting more insight into jn aethor dao hence effecting her psychy. She as shown previously learned the path she has to walk to progress her cultivation. And Jasmine is just maturing naturally and becoming less naive.

Ethan Barrow

TFTC!! New pet!!!! I wonder who it's parents are and how strong they are.

Chien Do

Well, looking back, i was quite harsh and somewhat of a blockhead on my comment, so I'm sorry and thank you and Brian for calling me out. What I would rather convey is my frustration on Jasmine as a character. To my understanding, Stella is still a teen, she is very flawed, but she protect and care a lot for MC (a rich history between them), so I like her. She also never shy from any danger which is very badass. But when you have an immature person having a disciple, who is pretty much a child, the whole thing just irks me to no end, or maybe just me being a father kinda make it so. And yes, no matter how strong/powerful/rich you are, if you are lazy/immature/hot-headed, I will not allow you to be my child's teacher. The concept of sending children to dangerous pockets also create a lot of Cognitive dissonance for me. On one hand, you want a lot of conflict, because without conflict, there is no growth. On the other hand, putting a child through life or death conflict is a bad idea to any parent. Another dissonance for me is seeing Jamine complain about stuff, and it sounds like first world problem for me. If you don't want to cultivate fast, then don't. If the bug meat is disgusting, you dont have to eat it, or maybe you can try to make it more pallatable. If author-nim make her trying to find a way to butcher the bug, make them delicious, and hey in the process, make her more in depth with "Nature" Qi, would that make more sense? Sitting down and hear Heaven whisper is more like "telling", go around and experiment stuffs is more like "showing" to me. My last point is that if you use Qi to explain everything, then your "words" lose a lot of meaning. Is a bug with Qi a bug, does it behave like a bug, is it smart like a monkey, does it have to eat or just absorb Qi, does it have sex,... Same for everything else. Anyway, I hate that you make this character. She is like mini Stela with little struggle and too much resources piled on her. And I agree with someone's opinion a few chapter back, if you keep introducing shallow characters, spend time on them rather than your main core group of character, your story is no different than a handful of sand, flowing away the moment you open your hand.

Brian Block

@Xkarnation, you responded while I was typing my essay! :D

Brian Block

Harsh, considering you didn't seem to actually read the chapter, as NONE of the things you mentioned are inconsistent with previous story points or worldbuilding. 1. She has to fight them because while the poison doesn't hurt her, it literally says in the chapter they can still physically hurt her with the spikes or just ripping her apart. She could have hidden and let the mantis die... but there is a paragraph explaining why she didn't. 2. She did face life or death, have your forgotten the poison pocket realm the previous month and the fact that her Master is a psycho who is willing to let a test kill her if it will help push her forward? Along with the arena battle, which could have killed her even though they had those shields (again, stated in the story). Also, the fast part of cultivation is due to Ash and the pocket realm(directly stated), not to mention I didn't see her being self-entitled here, she knows the realm is what made it fast and she is dreaming of the future, not assuming it will all happen easily or is rightfully her(again, directly stated that she needs to work hard on her skills and not rely on Ents or the super weapon Ash made her). 3. The bad taste is specifically due to the poison in them and the hair burning on because she is not prepping them correctly, again stated directly in the chapter. 4. As to why they are heavy, they are clearly dense, muscled, and it has already been stated people get a bit heavier as they cultivate, so it can be assumed monsters do as well. Jasmine is also young (not even a teen yet, if I recall correctly), and directly stated to be small/slender. 5. Lifespan is also years in some insects, although that is less common. This is a bug shaped monster that is cultivating, not a bug here on Earth. It is clearly stated that the moment you get to late Qi stage or pass into Soul Flame, you life is extended to some degree. Soul flame seems to be well over a century or two (see the old Redclaws when we meet them, recalling the wars we know are a 100+ years ago, with Star Cores living for many hundreds of year (Magnus Redclaw and other grand elders or high-end elders), Nascent soul thousands(literally every Nascent soul we meet is many centuries old and still "young", or Vincent, who in over a millennia old), and who knows for Monarchs. 6. I guess this one requires real world knowledge, not in the story. While bugs (Insects) are in clade pancrustacea, but don't include crabs or those in subphylum crustacea, only those in subphylum hexapod and related subphyla (although they are all arthropods). Most insects would be nasty to the average person, barring a few types that tend to be sweet, such as those eaten in Africa and Asia. They don't eat all insect, many of which are bitter or straight up poisonous to humans, only very specific species (about 2,000 total, 300-500 commonly, out of over a million species). That is about 0.05% of all insects being edible. If you are going to provide feedback, it is best to both read and remember the story before you call things out. It is also nice to provide constructive criticism along with the complaints. Not liking a chapter is of course your right and your own subjective opinion, but if you call out facts and inconsistencies that are simply false, that becomes objective. /Rant Over, sorry Xkarnation!

XKARNATION

Her cultivation is fast because she’s in a Qi rich realm and her poison body constitution allowed her to focus on cultivating rather than having to constantly fight them off. She also went to great lengths to maximise the use of her body constitution to accelerate her cultivation. You say the poison melted her brain during the fight, but you must have skim read the part she said if a needle hit her wind pipe she would die and the bugs were keeping their distance due to her whip. All the stuff you are saying about the bugs is nonsense since bugs aren’t the size of a persons head on earth, nor are mantisis a meter tall. Also you say mantis have short lifespan when cultivation removes lifespan as an issues. Bro wtf are you yapping on about

Chien Do

Such a bad chapter. Jasmin goes down the path of self-entitled fast paced cultivation with no real life or death challenge (why?). So many inconsistent things in this chapter. If the bug is the size of her head (like a ball), how can it be that heavy? Why does she need to fight them and not just stand there, let them bite her and let her poison work, did poison also melt her brain? Bug meat taste bad? You know that crab, shrimp,... are bugs underwater right. If you get a bug to be head-size, their meat (muscle) will taste normal. Scratch that, google how people in Asian/Africa make good dish from grass hopper. A cook blame his dish on the ingredients. Last but not least, bug is such a bad choice for a pet, just get a snake, poison lizard, moongoose something. Bugs are mostly untamable and short live. And what happened when your Star core Mantis goes around having sex and have a million egg with normal Mantis. Ugh.

Quinn

Great chapter bro. Her gaining a protecter is awesome. I’m starting to wonder if the disciple connection affects them both with each others quality’s. Stella’s become calmer and more focused. Jasmine seems to be getting more realistic and power driven. Plus she even compared the ability to befriend a beast to that of Stella

TreeReader

Yeah having family in medical field and growing up on farm nothing stops my food lmao

Qasim Jafri

TFTC, I wonder what Sam's mystic realm experience is like? We don't seem to have seen his POV in it before.

TreeReader

Ok was rooting for her to get a familiar the whoke time this is awesome 😁

Manlor

So cute! 🥰

Zecir

It's even better, she will be asking that while she has blood all over her

Xobody18 (Daniel)

Thanks for the chapter. MANTIS TIME!!!

Borbino the great

Can I drink while reading?

Gonvas

Can't wait to see her mother reaction 🤣

Basically God

Oh this should be great! Thanks for the chapter~♥

Spaghetti And Meatballs

Manny the Mantis has joined the Sect!

Ether's Blessed One

Ashlock has Larry and right Kaida (I almost forgot his name, haven't seen that introvert ink snake). Stella has Gupi as pet, Maple as Protector. Now her disciple has a mantis. Yep, it's official. Their family likes pets.

Amosz

Also she started to collect pets like her master!

Tara Lanth

Isint her Mom supposed to be waiting for her? Lol please make a part where she asks her mommy if she can keep her new pet LOL

Amosz

Warming: dont eat food Challenge: accepted Food: fries Result: success Reward: +1 resistance to vomiting

Austin T Delpier

Yay new monster pet!

Daniel Hamilton

Jasmine definitely takes after Stella. Oh look what a cute little creature. Everyone else “ahhhhhh a monster”

Daniel Hamilton

Nice POV chapter. If Jasmine only knew what Stella went through to get where she’s at. Too often we only see the success of the person and not the struggles they went through to be where they’re at.

Graceling

Tftc. I ate just fine while reading that. Sweet and Sour chicken

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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