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[Tree] Chapter 457: Silverspire Grand Elder

🕑 Added 2025-05-02 14:21:04 +0000 UTC

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TimeDrawsNigh

Cassian sounds like a pretty chill dude

Victor Desantiago

There is a nice character growth for Estella in this chapter. From “Murder Princess “ to “ Yakuza Princess “. She was a total grifter doing the carrot and stick play, only at gun point.

welp

He was STUCK though, incapable of moving up for a rather long time. Trapped or stalled might be better phrasing but I don't think specifying the exact point of cultivation is necessary.

welp

This is a very good edit. I like it. Much more satisfying and a lot more built.

Gustav Fischer

I always love me a good tree chappie. Keep it up man!

SteveS

I liked this chapter. Nice change!

ManguKing

The changes in pov gave me a headache. First person to thirs person without clear Mark's. The context gives it away, so I'm sure it's just a me issue

Alexey Gladkich

Hmm... "There was a swirling dome of ash that his spiritual senses couldn't penetrate, meaning it was beyond his cultivation realm." As I understood it, ash clouds, in general, interfere with perception, and it doesn't require the Ash cultivator to be of a higher realm - similar to water mist but maybe even more efficient. Shouldn't the Grand Elder know this info? Also here, "The last time he'd seen Magnus, he had been stuck in the Star Core Realm." It's too ambiguous. It should be written as in "the middle of Star Core Realm." Say, ascending to NS Realm after being stuck at the top of Star Core Realm is not nearly that impressive.

Brudog2

Thanks for the chapter

Sam

I hope we will see the results of the inheritance contest. I want to see how Ryker compared to the others

Ethan Barrow

TFTC!! Yes, the man who stands above all. Definitely not a demonic tree in a trench coat.

XKARNATION

I’ll probably revisit this chapter and add a few lines here and there to fix up the conversation and flesh out Cassian as a character some more

XKARNATION

What are you talking about

Vladimir Merritt

I'm very confused... because that is not a chapter of a person who has brain and is trying to use it to accomplish her goal... wtf did I just read and is soul pressure is now targeted? Can differentiate between allies and foes and can be resisted by those in lower lvl of cultivation?

Moon Winchester

Good chapter, but it read weird. I think we need a little more internal dialogue or emotional descriptions for Cassian. Like how he’s getting emotional whiplash than the constant barrage of information that sounds utterly insane but spoken with such confidence. He feels like he goes with the flow a bit too much, which is understandable since someone at his stage of cultivation could probably think of responses and stuff very fast, but I feel like you gave us a lot of descriptions, but then left out a lot of others feeling like you went halfway so I felt odd to read. I use text to speech for any errors fuck you

VolfKami

"Did you receive divine enlightenment from a god's inheritance?" I mean technically it's divine assistance, the favor of a god, regular enlightenment, and the other elder got an inheritance ..... but I mean it's close enough to yes that I'd just go with it.

Basically God

Thanks for the chapter~♥

Victor Desantiago

If was a good call with the change👍🏼

Someone

The starwevers

Billy Nguyen

When Cassian stopped in his tracks. For continuity I assume he grabbed his pendant to confirm? Just asking in case that was the intent as it doesn't explicitly say that, but it is inferred. Thanks for the chapter!!

Donna Watkins

Love this chapter Stella acting like a queen was beautiful

XKARNATION

Added in a reference

Alexey Gladkich

Magnus Redclaw ate the truffle, which made him young? Shouldn't Silver Spire Grand Elder mention it in some way?

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Xobody18 (Daniel)

LETS GOOOO

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