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[Tree] Chapter 264: Jasmine's Master

🕑 Added 2024-02-13 12:09:40 +0000 UTC

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XKARNATION

fixed

XKARNATION

lmao

Didde

Jasmine should be falling at terminal velocity (200km/h), and then goes through a portal into her mother. Shouldn't both Jasmine and maybe her mother die by this since they are first stage if barley that. Stella could make a portal with orientation up so the girl comes flying up and then gets slowed down and then Stella can catch her with telekinesis or whatnot.

Sebastian Lozano

WOWWWWWW. I'm rereading old chapters and in 117, Stella rides on a sword for the first time with the Redclaw Grand Elder and is afraid of falling off. In like chapter 60, she comes back from studying the ancient runic language and is scared shitless of Larry. Omfg. I'd please love you to include a little bit of callbacks if possible to these for comedy. It's just been so long that so many readers must have forgotten about these things. Stella is such a bitch ahahahaha. I love her.

Shaitan

That cool comment won her soooooo many brownie points

Nickolas Shoemaker

I think you meant pessimistic rather than pedantic, a person is pedantic when they argue about unnecessary details. Not really what I would say about a person worried their daughter will fall to their death.

Rain

Hahahahaha TFC!

XKARNATION

Yup

Azvalon

Stella has still a lot to learn despite her immense storage of knowledge from her bloodline. It takes far more than just strength and knowledge to be a good teacher, without even talking about a great teacher. Wisdom especially amongst others. I suppose she doesn't get generational wisdom from her bloodline, but I'm sure teaching and raising Jaz will be as educational and wisdom granting for her as it will be for Jaz.

Sebastian Lozano

I think you may want to very slightly edit the part where Stella is talking about Larry as it is an opportunity for either comedy or strengthening the Stella-Catherine/Jasmine bond. Stella was terrified of Larry when she and Diana came back from studying the ancient runic language. So it would be comedic to include even just one line to make readers recall why it's so ironic for Stella to be nonchalant about the mortal's fear like "Stella recalled her fear of Larry back then. With that in mind, she told Catherine 'if something like this scares you...'" "The pink-haired woman is Elaine. She's great, and of course, you have Diana at the far end, who you met earlier," who should be changed to whom. Also, f in the chat for Sam. I wonder if he'll ever acually climb Redvine Peak to find out Stella already has a favorite disciple hahaha.

wayoutofsight

Talking about Stella taking disciples, there's a chance for us to see Sam (the child she saved in chapter 77) becoming a disciple in the future?

Sebastian Lozano

You could have a death qi user visit redvine after Ah uses the necroflora sovereign ability since it releases a ton of death qi. Perhaps a death qi bounty hunter after Stella's head changed sides.

Kedar

Also just thought that it would be interesting if they could influence what qi someone has when uplifting a mortal, like it they gave them the fruit in an area if just one type of qi, so they can only get that one type at first, that would prolly make them have that type of affinity.

Alexey Gladkich

Ash's progeny develop affinity depending on the Qi they cultivate during soul forge realm. Human mortal and cultivators likely operate similarly.

Kedar

Did I miss it, or do we not know what affinity the mortals made cultivators are. Also if it's random I can see how elevation of mortals is a very good recruitment strategy right now for ashfallen as there is very unlikely to be hidden loyalty in mortals, especially younger ones.

TreeReader

Great chapter just so you know missed a letter though 😋 "The largest sider she had ever seen was no more than the size of her palm" sider instead of spider

Jonathan Willis

Thanks for the chapter. I'm now imaging Stella in the future with a whole group of disciples bowing around her like she saw in her ideal illusion. If it won't happen organically, why not just help it along.

Samuel Terrazas

Kane is merely a student. Jasmine is a disciple. Kane better hope that he gets along with her or he is toast

Samuel Terrazas

Maybe even a fellow bounty hunter? The link is already there

Vincebourgh

Oooh, I can't wait to see what conflicts will emerge between Stella and Jaz' parents. They fear her of course but they've shown to love and fear for their daughter more. How would Stelle react if two quasi mortals berate her for putting Jaz into unnecessary danger?

Themo Grulld

Nice chappy made me happy 😊😁

Sleepking10

I feel like that would a good idea maybe finds one on her outing on a mission to kill someone

XKARNATION

Yeah sounds cool… now I need Diana to get jealous of Stella’s disciple and go find one for herself

Sleepking10

A demon and the grim reaper think about it 🤷 if you want a character background and stuff i got you lol think about it

XKARNATION

That would be rather fitting wouldn't it

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Sleepking10

I want a cultivator who uses death Qi that’s a loner like Diana and becomes her disciple lol great chapter

Ether's Blessed One

Odd master? Jazmine dear, if only you know. Then again she would just think Stella is cool.

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! So another student for Stella, I wonder if she and Kane will get along?

ShinyBlu

🎉

Ethan Barrow

TFTC!

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the way early chapter!


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