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[Tree] Chapter 230: (Interlude) Return to Duskwalker

🕑 Added 2023-12-07 20:00:05 +0000 UTC

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phantom

Meanwhile I was over here thinking a nascent tier demonic tree with dark affinity would be interesting.

Jonathan Willis

I wasn't serious about recruiting Evelyn, it was a joke. I never said Nox did anything wrong with her family situation, I said she's self serving. I personally don't know how I'd handle the situation, and I don't fault her choice. Especially seeing as she didn't know her sister would just get given to them in her place. Evelyn being angry at her sister makes sense, she spent the last 500 years as a sextoy as a direct consequence for Nox running away, with their father's eventual death also possibly related to that, so of course she resents her sister. Emotions aren't always logical, Evelyn may truely just selfishly resent Nox didn't suffer instead of her, but she also might just resent the fact Nox successfully escaped and she didn't. Or she might not truely resent Nox at all, and hates the situation and her absent sister is just a convenient scapegoat to vent her emotions. Nox planned to betray them and steal the earrings even before they showed off any of the pills, the regular pills just didn't change her mind, and the special pills reaffirmed in her mind she made the right decision.

Alexey Gladkich

I wouldn't say Evelyn is any better than Nox nor I see anything in particular that Nox did wrong given the circumstances. For instance, Evelyn hates Nox cause she refused to sacrifice herself to improve life of their family. Basically, she is angry at Nox for not wanting to live in misery. How dare she not sacrifice herself for my sake! She was supposed to live in misery not me! And I don't know where you got the idea that Nox doesn't comprehend long term benefits. In her POV, it was explained that it would be suicide to sell pills from the Ashfallen sect. Just like Ash is scared to sell them not anonymously, so were the merchants.

Jonathan Willis

I agree. But that doesn't change my personal opinion of her. I like her as a villain. I'm indifferent to her as a potential recruit. She's far to self serving for me to ever believe she won't find a way to backstab Ashfallen Sect once she's gotten what she wants from them. And she's already shown she's too impatient to reap long term benefits, it's what got her in the fight with Ashfallen sect in the first place.

Alexey Gladkich

Storywise it just doesn't work. Normal cultivators don't have access to cultivation resources that Ash has and continuously stagnate compared to Ashfallen sect. So either they join, die, or become too weak and irrelevant.

Jonathan Willis

Thanks for the chapter. I would feel bad for Nox, but she successfully escaped. It's her sister that I feel bad for. Maybe Ash can recruit her instead of Nox. Mostly joking, but I do find Nox far more interesting as a villain or a third-party.

XKARNATION

ty! fixed

Alexey Gladkich

Also Voidmind are limited to Star Core. I have some doubts that they can cleanse/eliminate the forming soul as such comprehension begins at Nascent Soul.

Alexey Gladkich

Typos: Her heat -> Her heart The phrase "Her heat had long gone cold..." has some weird meaning, lmao. Did she break the engagement by cheating cause she was in heat? Never knew Cultivators had such tendencies.

Me

Yeah, that's not going to work is it? It's the cursed sap of the demi divine tree that gave her that curse. And the demidivine tree is immune to void qui. Then again, maybe the demonic tree grown from the sap isn't? An interesting conundrum in either case.

Demonlord

Thanks for the nice chapter 😊 I hope the curse will stay with her forever so she have to go to Ash and Stella to apologize

Alexey Gladkich

Ashfallen isn't the "forgive and forget" type of sect. But surely they have a tricky fox that can make that happen. Edit: earlier mistyped "isn't" for "is". Duh.

Ethan Barrow

It could also be a name for ego and style points to be fair, but I like your ideas behind the name.

XKARNATION

I don't know! Don't look at me...

Ethan Barrow

Honestly a bit hard to say, she committed the biggest crime in the whole Ashfallen sect by attacking the Princess Stella. But there might still be hope, who to say beside the author.

Alexey Gladkich

From the early chapters, Nox was given a lot more detail. So from the start I was and still am confident that she'll eventually join the Ashfallen sect.

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Alexey Gladkich

Celestial Warden? Is it cause he is a celestial cultivator or that he protects them from the mighty Celestial Empire?

Ethan Barrow

I hate that you have humanized Nox to me slightly, well played. Thanks for the chapter!

jalapenochips

I like that we’re getting our first time skip in many, many chapters. Also damn, bro has really been crushing on the same woman for half a millennium

XKARNATION

Yeye fixed

Alexey Gladkich

Duskfallen sounded odd after Ashfallen and Crestfallen already present. While Duskwalker is a nice reference.

XKARNATION

Fixed! I had it mistyped in my notes which caused the problem

Alexey Gladkich

Is she Nox Duskwalker or Nox Duskfallen? First time her family name was stated it was Duskwalker.

Taylor

What are the chances she groups up with Elaine's disgraced brother?

Alexey Gladkich

Voidminds will surely reject her. Both due to her lack of funds and them being busy for potential war. Probably she'll encounter Dante and he'll require her help in his investigation.

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! Glad she didn't realize it's Diana, that would have been a bit too extreme a coincidence for her to overhear - too unbelievable. It's a good thing the voidmind family is in disarray, might mean Nox will have trouble getting their help. But could also mean she allies with them against Ashfallen unfortunately.

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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