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[Tree] Chapter 180: Ulterior Motives

🕑 Added 2023-09-10 22:15:21 +0000 UTC

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Are you getting a we comic? 👀

Me

I suggest taking a trip to Hakone if you are somewhere close by. You can take the Romancecar from Tokyo to get there. Hakone is famous for it's onsen. There are over 80 of them in the area. I myself spent almost a week just wandering through the area staying at a different oncen resort every day, totally worth it.

Victor Mijares

Nice. Staying to tourist areas? Seen videos mention stuff like that. Better spot outside tourist spots but not exactly tourist friendly

XKARNATION

First time here so a lot of sight seeing. Was mostly for a holiday away from screens

Victor Mijares

So anything In General you went to Japan for? Few places I do. Theme parks and such.

Bernat Saenz

Thank you for finding the time to write while traveling, I hope you enjoy your holidays. 🇯🇵

Victor Mijares

If the characters know everything the readers do, this would be a poor story. People forget things. It's already shown that stella doesn't really always think stuff through. Also, do you remember every single person and thing all the time? Just in chance you might need it later.

kalem

So this one's kinda not excusable... Stella has met this person before? Why would she not be wearing the full wooden mask? and the cloak that hides ones cultivation? because we know its not just common knowledge, its been explained to her in both story dialogue for us to read, and in hand waved "got a talking to for hours" that people can track and tell who people are just by feeling their aura, which she herself has done.... So... it makes exactly no sense for her to think she's fooling anyone without at least having a full face mask and a cloak or some other gear to completely block out her aura.... and more so than that, she kinda already knows this person was able to see passed those cloaks because, you know, she did that the first time she saw diana wearing one. Stella literally knows, from first hand experience, that this person is not fooled by aura blocking gear... So why would she even bother putting on the whole gettup.

Thomas Shaw

Coco’s curry, beef bowl, and chu-hi’s

XKARNATION

So long as each chapter advances the plot in a meaningful way and around 2500 words then I’m happy with it. Due to the way arcs are structured, there will naturally be many chapters in a row of build up where the plot moves slower which then goes to a climax. Right now we are in the build up chapters for book 3 so plots a bit slow.

Victor Mijares

Question xkarn, when writing your story. How you know when you have too much or too little? Like info and such per chapters.

Kennyevilmonkey

Lucky, I want to go to Japan.

Andrew

Thank you!


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