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[Tree] Chapter 133: Recharging Ents

🕑 Added 2023-06-23 23:23:53 +0000 UTC

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Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Phrance

The chapter was great I really like the idea of needing to expand and grow more demonic trees as a large Qi network and that Qi resources are the limitations of the SS grade. It might get weird having Tree enter the mystic realm with the time difference inside and outside and both skills time limits.

Me

I figured as much. But with ashlock now planning to plant a ring of trees around the peak you are kind of inviting that question in. Even with the caveat that ashlock could move the trees away if neeeded. Might be an idea for ash to instead plant a ring of trees for nurturing but considering that red vine peak doesn't have much of a soillayer the growth of those trees would have to be fueled largely by qui. That would cut quite severly into ash's reserves especially if he wants to nurture them to the star core realm. It might be a better idea to make that ring down in the forest next to Redvine peak and only have one tree on the peak itself for the purpose of entering the mystic realm. That of course might just be me but this solution seems a bit more reasonable to me^^

XKARNATION

It's kinda kept vague on purpose, as I don't want to start having to measure the size of things to see if they can fit on the mountain peak.

Ethan Barrow

Would it go from Bob to Ben?

Thank you for the chapter

Me

How large exactly is Red vine peak? Because it doesn't exactly take mcuh space to house a few thousand people. Sure, with classical chinese villas being build not for height but for area it's gonna be larger but even then...

Demonlord

Thanks for the awesome chapter 😊

Sly Bayesian Fox

Creating a charging-station forest powering the most powerful army in the Netherworld ? I live to read those kinds of munchkin-crazy ideas!

Andrew

Thank you!

XKARNATION

cool idea

XKARNATION

fixed

XKARNATION

All fixed! ty

Human2849

> Elder Mo stood and had an almost fanatic demeanor: "Due to the I'd recommend changing fanatic to fanatical and I think the colon should be a comma Elder Mo stood and had an almost **fanatical** demeanor**,** > Except hers was special as lightning arced between the star and the rest of her body like stored electricity. From your wording I don't think "like" works here because what you're saying isn't a comparison "This is like that" but a statement of fact "This lightning that looks like this is acting in this way" To keep "like" I think you need to compare it to something like a tesla coil or like a capacitor "Except hers was special as lightning arced between the star and the rest of her body like a capacitor." Otherwise changing "like" to "as" might work "Except hers was special as lightning arced between the star and the rest of her body as stored electricity." > However, it was near empty right now, and it was drawing on his Ashlock's Star Core through the link to fill itself up. Either "his" or "Ashlock's" should be removed. "However, it was near empty right now, and it was drawing on ****Ashlock's Star Core through the link to fill itself up." > Although the Ents Star Core produced "Ents" needs an apostrophe "Although the **Ent's** Star Core produced"

darkmuch

>Stella used the lighting Qi stored within herself, her Star Core wouldn't generate any new lighting Qi, only spatial Qi, as that was her affinity. Lightning. Spell check & lighting is the bane of all fantasy series with frequent use of lightning. I can’t help picturing someone flicking a light switch when I see this

Kedar

Would also be nice to see him starting to plan ahead a bit

Kedar

Would be interesting if ash made something like elemental glades with a large tree/kid of his attuned to specific elements/ki types. That way he is making spots to grow a verity of alchemy ingredients as well as set up cultivating spots for any cultivator he wants to bring in.

XKARNATION

Good point actually, will fix that

Alexey Gladkich

Didn't the worm enter the pocket realms just a day before the last? How come Elders didn't have time at all to cultivate.

Koza0

Thank you for the chapter!


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