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[Tree] Chapter 128: Emperor of the Spirit Trees

🕑 Added 2023-06-15 17:28:29 +0000 UTC

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Koza0

Also I'm not to sure, but I think; Ashlock noticed his Star Core suddenly *glow exceptionally bright and then *collapse, losing most of the Qi he had gathered. Could be something along like; ->Ashlock noticed his Star Core [was] suddenly *glowing exceptionally bright and then [it] *collapsed, losing most of the Qi he had gathered. (Not to sure, it just feels like something is missing with the wording)

Phrance

I like the change it seems like trees awareness of his surroundings will be better being connected to his offspring like getting a Minimap. I do feel that the S grade draws seem to be all skills and we haven't seen many interesting item draws in a while just a lot looted items. I think if tree gets too many skills they wont all have time to shine.

XKARNATION

I only make edits if I agree with them. I also much prefer the edited version

Vanessa Sorrell

It only seemed weak because Ash is weak right now. When Ash has children halfway around the world, or even in different worlds it will not be weak. This edit is okay, but I think the first version was fine and the author shouldn't be pressured into writing the book the way the readers want it to go. It will take all the fun out of it for them. The Mystic Realm skill is awesome, but keep in mind it only provides entry and exit to the pocket dimensions, it does not create them or have any other power over them.

Koza0

Thank you for the Chapter, I enjoyed both pre and post edits, however the implications of the post edited ability has much more depth and potential in the future with it being a physical/soul-based/consciousness ability in one, which really feels like the scope of the S ranks so far. Thank you for your determination and response to feedback. You're awesome <3

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Updated Chapter.

Sly Bayesian Fox

Baby trees are so cute! Hopefully they won't form adult egos anytime soon.

Sancturillore -- Élie Simard-Wallot

Yeah, that was a very nice edit.

darkmuch

(Edit: I posted this before seeing the rewrite, I’ll just leave this here to avoid confusion) Since the chapter is being rewritten due to feedback, I’ll offer my 2 cents. I thought the skill was good on first read and had no problems… but as others pointed out it doesn’t feel very S rank. Yes it saves him from having to use portals all the time. But it seems very limited. Those restrictions make it seem more like an B rank skill. Maybe if he didn’t have spatial affinity this would have been a huge deal… but he does. (I really wish mobile would allow me to add a line break here). I think to appease some of the critics the skill could be buffed by adding some aspect that talks about how it nurtures progeny. Maybe he can make available a reservoir of qi that progeny use for defense. Or the skill scales with cultivation level(probably does already but make that more clear), making the restrictions decrease over time. A monarch level tree network should be practically automatic in its defense. Thus the skill as it is, only appears weak because he got it so early.

XKARNATION

glad to hear <3

Beeees!

Really like the edits, the implications of this root merging will be fun to see into the future

Valderan

Kind of surprised some people feel the new skill is underpowered and innapropriate. It felt to me like Ashlock was moving closer towards becoming a sort of disembodied spirit of the forest. Abandoning his form to be everywhere and nowhere with this as a third or fourth step in that process. Shifting his perceptions throughout his enormous size, the mycellium network, the mystic realm, all demonstrating his move towards this more omnipresent structure.

Demonlord

Thanks for the chapter 😊

Human2849

> If I can reach Narscent Soul Realm Should probably be "If I can reach Nascent Soul Realm"


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