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[Tree] Chapter 110: Tendrils of the Void

🕑 Added 2023-05-24 00:39:30 +0000 UTC

Comments

Zach G

Grammar and editing on these chapters is already 10x better than most everything else I read. One small mistake here and there isn’t problem!

Valderan

Poor Douglas. The world needs ditch diggers too but is it too much to ask to not crap in them before you finish?

Sancturillore -- Élie Simard-Wallot

I guess I'll just have to wait/read on and see how that ink attribute will develop.

Sancturillore -- Élie Simard-Wallot

Ink? Honestly, that does disappoint me a bit. I was hoping for something more Nidhogg-like. And spirit/soul attribute sounded really interesting.

Tanner Porter

I didn’t really notice a difference in quality 🤷🏻‍♂️

XKARNATION

Ah yes thanks!

Basically God

The inky noodle has been born... Thanks for the chapter~♥

Sleepking10

Thank you as always

TheFallingWhale

Chapter looks good to me and it makes sense to only rough edit when you are still writing and then do a final edit when the book is done

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Didde

Tftc Edit suggestion: rift shattered on contract in an explosion -> contact

Wanderer

True

BerciTheBeast

Weak beasts give little to no credits, altho it was soul fire stage.

Wanderer

The only error I saw was when Ash looked at his credits and he had no Sacrifice Credits, despite having eaten a beast moments before

Beeees!

Fine quality for me! I expect Patreon chapters to be rougher drafts than RR tho. Didn't notice any errors myself, but I'm pretty blind to small typos


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