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[Tree] Chapter 76: Death by a thousand cuts

🕑 Added 2023-03-28 00:33:03 +0000 UTC

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XKARNATION

Just made a quick change to that scene. Should be better now.

XKARNATION

Hmm I see… I’ll add a bit to this scene then

darkmuch

Its really weird to go from a touching emotional moment where tree finally conveys his feelings to Stella... To fantasizing about killing things with his leaves. Then ordering her to leave. Its emotional whiplash. We couldn't spend a little bit of time on that? Maybe a telekinetic hug using the leaves? I thought that was what you were leading up to at first, some sort of dichotomy between his demon side and caring.

XKARNATION

Thanks

Alexandria Clarke

>Next chapter button is missing

Alexandria Clarke

>He had found a mid-stay Qi realm beast to practice his flying leaves technique. >He had found a mid-size Qi realm beast to practice his flying leaves technique. (I am really not sure what this was meant to be)

Alexandria Clarke

>Once the Reclaws move in, I will have them return life to normal >Once the Redclaws move in, I will have them return life to normal

Alexandria Clarke

>"Say, Tree, you will still need me around even if you could speak, right?" >"Say, Tree, you would still need me around even if you could speak, right?"

Alexandria Clarke

>The spirit root-improving truffle was the key to his sect's future. >The spirit-root-improving truffle was the key to his sect's future.

Alexandria Clarke

Same format as previous chapter's corrections: >The Reclaws had been the same when they fought Larry. >The Redclaws had been the same when they fought Larry.

emanym

It's a baby isn't it?

XKARNATION

cliff hanger is my middle name ;)

Really? A cliff hanger?

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Wanderer

Your efforts to bring us a great story are highly appreciated! Thank you for the chapter!

XKARNATION

Yay 😊

Ethan Barrow

Man, I love this story. Thanks for another chapter!


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