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[NB] 77. START OF BOOK 2

🕑 Added 2023-02-16 00:10:22 +0000 UTC

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XKARNATION

Ahhh you might be confused. Book 2 started at chapter 77. The royal road book 1 is incorrect because my publisher asked me to add another arc onto the end to pad word count and to add more explanations.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Gopard

I get both reasonings honestly, there were points in book two that made me consider dropping the book because of the pacing, like several chapters of nothing but "meaningless fighting and descending" and then always one chapter extremely densely packed with story (the appearence of Vampires happened very suddenly when reading the book, for example), then the moment Viktor reached the World Core things just went completely haywire and it almost felt like we go an "entire book of plot development" in the last few chapter. This chapter DOES feel more "connected" to the story then the original onee in my opinion, but even those one were nice in that world-building, foreshadowing, character-development and even plot development were present. Giving a very nice counter expression to the endless singleminded grind that was the Grand Dungeon! HOWEVER, it also is no Tree chapter! I'm not sure if this travesty can EVER be forgiven not matter how good this book will be! :)

XKARNATION

Haha, yea…

phantom

I just assumed it would have a brief explanation after. either dungeon or farm lands. I doubt that was even close to the most jarring start for a book 2.

XKARNATION

Yea... also since this will be the first chapter of the new book, for amazon readers, there will be like a 3-month gap between books, so this chapter acts as a recap for them to understand what the plot was about again. (You will notice I showed/described most of the main cast and went over the plot's main focus again.)

Kermit The Frog

Fair enough, for me it was more "what the fuck is going on" but similar vibes sure 🐸

XKARNATION

I did a random ass time skip and realized I hadn't done any build-up to the invasion of the frostlands. It just felt bad. (Spoiler: I planned for Victor to offer food and stuff, but as readers you would be wondering where the fk the food came from etc)

Kermit The Frog

Was it the lack of context that made you rethink the removed chapters?


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