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98. Child of Nightshade

🕑 Added 2022-07-04 17:35:31 +0000 UTC

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XKARNATION

Yes I know, its answered in the next chapter.

Commander XD

Thanks for the chapter. You said very clearly in one of the first chapters that humans cannot become vampires, which contradicts what is happening in this chapter.

bob barker

It could be said that after he scanned her, he ruled that [her] becoming a vampire [given the said lack of changes] is impossible, and thus no changes have to be made to the previous or current story

XKARNATION

Never mind, ill explain it more in next chapter with something along the lines of "Damien didn't know about it before but learned through his dreams/vanity" that way people who already read the last part and remember won't get confused.

XKARNATION

God darn it, this wasn't in my notes. Guess ill go back to chap 30 and rewrite that part.

EnderScroll

Found it. Chapter 30 Blood Queen. Damien tilted his head, “No. Becoming a vampire is impossible, we have different biology from humans. Although we look similar, on the inside we have completely different organs and digestive systems. I suspect you are becoming a Blood Queen.”

XKARNATION

I think you are getting confused. I mentioned that Noble vampires and vampires couldn't mate with each other since their genetic makeup was too different. I never mentioned anything about humans... (I think ;)

EnderScroll

Thanks for the chapter! Also not complaining but I thought in one of your earlier chapters you said humans couldn’t turn into vampires because their internal makeup was too different. What changed?

XKARNATION

Fixed! Glad you enjoyed :)

bob barker

The human-vampire transition description was well done. ------ and adventures > adventurers (?) met Damiens > Damien's shalt > shan't Masters teachings > Master's

XKARNATION

indeed

Don't do drugs kids.

XKARNATION

:)

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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