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44. Kneel before a superior existence

🕑 Added 2022-02-13 21:18:24 +0000 UTC

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Felipe Diaz

Great chapter, the motives and character development is there, and does not seem like a bit much.

Lino

Well no he says the strong do not require justification for their actions. That means might makes right. Which is stupid af. He also kills the guy to supposedly prove that he is wrong but what has he actually proven? That the strong can murder as they please? Sure. But not that they require no justification. Or even that the guy was wrong. What right does Damien have to rule that land? Damien may see humans as animals but imo it´s 1. not believable a intelligent 21st century individual would come to that conclusion this quickly. 2. makes him a pretty boring one dimensional just evil for the sake of evil villain. Which can work as a mediocre antagonist but not really as a protagonist. This can work if this is a redemption story but I do not feel it is. That said I don´t really like telling people how to write their story. You do you. Just saying might makes right is pretty nonsensical.

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

XKARNATION

He's saying that just because the old guy has a justified reason for his actions doesn't make it correct, in this word the strong get to decided other people's fates. Also, imagine you come home and there's a load of rats living in your house, now imagine those rats come to the front door and complain that the humans from other houses kicked them out so their only option was to come here. If those rats refused to obey you and leave your house and demanded to stay, would you not kill them? Damien sees humans as animals, no different from a pig or a rat. Hence the fact he doesn't care about killing some guy that stood up against him. Hope that makes sense. TLDR; just cuz a rat beat you in a word contest would you not just kill it?

Lino

The whole might makes right thing feels a bit much. I get the protagonist is meant to be a villain and vampire but tbh that’s not even a good villain motivation nevermind for a protagonist villain. He essentially got beaten in a word contest so he kills the guy. Idk that seems pretty weak and kinda pathetic to me. Almost comically so.

XKARNATION

Thank you for the kind words, I try my best to improve everyday :)

RainbowBeheader

Thanks for writing so much in such short time and in great quality


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