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21. An Ambush of Horrific Proportions

🕑 Added 2022-01-22 19:35:23 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

*cheer*

XKARNATION

I have been thinking over your feedback and it has given me a great idea for tomorrow's chapter, hopefully, I will give a good backstory as to why they are so incompetent and it matches with the rest of the story as well. I really appreciate this kind of feedback since you see the chapters before other people so you can help me spot things I missed out such as this!

Mr. Bigglesworth

Seems like a massive gap in 'elite' guard training to ignore the potential threat of risen dead when it's known that necromancers exist. Standard training to burn bodies from a distance would become common just to stop a situation like this. Skills mean nothing without skill.

XKARNATION

Also, zombies are not common as they have to be raised by necromancers which is very rare as it's illegal to be one. This group of young soldiers have never been trained to deal with zombies because of this and therefore didn't think to be cautious when approaching 'dead' bodies.

XKARNATION

well all the bodies have been lying lifeless on the floor for the last 30 mins without moving and they "crowded" around the nearest corpse to themselves. They were distracted and didn't notice that one of the corpses had stood back up behind them. Also although they call themselves "elite guards" they are similar to Imyrll in that they are all the weaker of the Queens guards that were gifter to the princess on her 18th birthday. Real elite guards would all have B tier skills but this group is filled with young soldiers with C grade skills.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Like, what elite guards crowd around dead targets without making sure of the kills? If zombies are a thing this scene makes 0 sense for so-called elite guards.


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