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35. Playing in the palm of his hand

🕑 Added 2022-02-04 19:14:09 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

*cheer*

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

XKARNATION

I shall explain all those points in today/tomorrows chapter (hint: MC is going to join the Mage Tower and work up its ranked by himself without being handed out the position but earn it instead with his cheat knowledge of magic, also another hint they WILL know he is a vampire, not going to hide it)

Mr. Bigglesworth

I'm still a bit confused how the Prince can set him up with a cushy position in the Mage Tower like Head Librarian to be honest. Another point is if the king loathes his son that much, why exactly is he being allowed to exist, accumulate power, and cause problems for his more beloved sister? It makes the king seem either completely oblivious to the growing issue which doesn't at all align with a ruler, or suspiciously inept which again doesn't at all align with a ruler. That there isn't a spy force on the king's side keeping him abreast of the issue seems a strange gap for other kingdom's to easily exploit, too. A point that hasn't been mentioned at all is the Mage Tower uber powerhouse. I'm super curious why someone so interested in research hasn't bothered to take a look at the only known 'Noble' vampire who isn't frothing at the mouth and slavering for blood. It seems strange the local demigod doesn't bother with checking such a fascinating specimen out.

XKARNATION

Just made some quick edits to fix some of the plot holes u noticed, ty for feedback :D

XKARNATION

However! I do agree about floating the vial away for evidence, I simply didn't think of that, also the necromancy spell will be explained in a future chapter (basically it was a delayed curse and August only had to say a short incarnation to activate it. That's why nobody noticed it) I just didn't mention it in this chapter since it had already gone for 3.5k words

XKARNATION

He's only been a Duke for a single night, there was no massive announcement to everyone that he is a Duke because he is only an 'honorary' duke, not a real one. Therefore no nobles would care to attend a duel between two university teachers. Their sons/daughters are there anyways. Also the Prince treats everyone badly, he even bullies his own father around. Why would he care about a day old Duke who has no backing or force? Also the 'deal' was made without him between the Princess and the King (The king/princess don't like August and think he is creepy/psycho so they made this deal without his input) in Augusts mind Damien is a threat to his position as the heir as Emilia now has access to a teacher of Luna runes. Also about exposing the Prince, he is alone in an arena surrounded by thousands of people all calling him a murderer, Prince Augusts men steered the crowds opinion and made sure they are all against Damien. Do you want Damien to just suddenly shout "Prince August is a Necromancer!" Who would listen to him? The body was taken away.

XKARNATION

Any parts in particular?

Mr. Bigglesworth

Uh, what? This entire scene makes no logical sense. First, the fact that his hand was changed would be obvious. Second, if the duel is able to be interfered with to this extent, duels would be useless. Third, in front of the eyes of all those 'magic' students no one notices necromancy the forbidden art being used? 0 logic there. No one questions the use of a forbidden substance like devil's tears in a duel, or notices Victor attempting to use it, like, what? This chapter is way too out of character. He didn't float the vial away as evidence? The princess or king don't bother to attend a duel with the new DUKE? The prince treats a DUKE in this manner? No other major nobles care? Why is the Prince able to give a position in the Mage Tower why doesn't the MC just waltz in and say he's a DUKE and get one himself? Why doesn't he bother revealing the prince is a Necromancer, he can easily claim it is because of his superior vampire senses. He's a DUKE, at the very least this chapter establishes that noble ranks apparently mean nothing more than garbage toilet paper does.


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