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32. Mortal Demigods

🕑 Added 2022-02-01 21:55:59 +0000 UTC

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RainbowBeheader

Your previous story was good, but yeah. He got strong too early Breaking limits is nice, but if he can break them were they truly limits or just something less?

RainbowBeheader

Yup, otherwise he would be soon way too op

XKARNATION

I plan for this novel to go for another few hundred chapters so I have to balance out him gaining too much power too quickly as this was an issue I ran into with my previous novel (mc became a god by chapter 30 something, it was a nightmare to balance), basically, I am making this magic system up as I go along so I have to be really careful about breaking random limits and stuff as a lot of readers don't like having a system shown to them just for the MC to conveniently find a way to break it. Your idea is decent but I don't plan for there to be any time skips of more than a few months in this story so the readers would never actually get to see him unlocking his souls potential, I could only hint at it in later chapters that it COULD be possible in the future but not now...

Jonas

But then he should somehow be able to break that limit but that would take time but as a vampire he can take 500 years just Sitting and scratching at his soul till that limit goes away

XKARNATION

Or there's a limit to how many schools of magic can be raised to A tier as there's a limit to the number of spirits that can be contracted or elemental stones consumed.

Jonas

Maybe every soul has limits and to learn more magic he has to break them somehow?

XKARNATION

Yea I am in the process of exploring ideas, maybe something like the more schools of magic he learns the harder it becomes to level up (exp is shared between the different magic schools) so at some point it becomes counterproductive.

Jonas

Maybe let him think that normal mortals are not worth of being his contracted and the have to be somehow special?

XKARNATION

He will do that in the future but I will need to put some kind of limit or something on it as it will make the story messy and confusing if the MC is learning too many spells and stuff at once

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter Why just the two collect blood contracts and build your affinities


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