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Chapter 106 In space with a junkyard ship

🕑 Added 2025-10-13 15:05:15 +0000 UTC

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Apinsig

Thank you for pointing it out, I will add that to the list of words I overuse. Don't know why but some words just keep showing up and I don't notice them until pointed out 😅

SnufflenoseSmooshwhiskers

I'm thoroughly enjoying your story thus far. However, I'd like to offer a recommendation about some of your word choices. I've noticed that you use the word "quite" very frequently, multiple times in a sentence even. It can be distracting when it pops up repeatedly. There are a number of synonyms that could be substituted, some of which could be more descriptive in context since "quite" can be rather vague and ambiguous sometimes. Thanks for the chapter.

Chimera

You can lessen the the issue of drag in the water dungeons by super heating the round or applying a hydrophobic coating to the rounds https://youtu.be/EQCzO4RfZAM?t=162 this way you can use guns underwater

Apinsig

It's because of his affinities and how his body is built

Jaksterzoo

Over 700+ connections… hey did I miss something or does Remi not have anything that boosts connections (that we know of)? Curious, because it sounds like the vast majority, going to guess 85%+ of people using AI, struggle with having a dozen without supporting skills. Even the savants would have over 100, from what it sounded like so far.

RedLeaf

Thanks for the chapter!

ReadingObsessed

NICE

brennon Petersen

Tftc!


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