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Chapter 5 In space with a junkyard ship

🕑 Added 2025-03-09 19:02:37 +0000 UTC

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Apinsig

Tnx for pointing that out I would have not noticed it if you didn't.

BookDragonling

Loving the story so far! Sweet baby Jesus you used the word "just" way too many times. I catch myself doing it as well but this was pretty constant and now the word "just" has lost any meaning to me. Semantic satiation. Half of this chapter was me feeling pain at reading "just" again and the other half was me fearfully waiting for another "just" to jump out at me and then having to reread the section because I wasn't paying enough attention. I'll "just" be hiding under my covers if anyone needs me.

ReadingObsessed

Great stuff! So much potential!

Apinsig

For sure, the other one will just go into waiting until it's the right time. Can't really write 3 story's at the same time 😅.

Zarik0

Ahah it was so good to read xD Very organic and flow beautifully about showing and building the worldbuilding and the MC character, neat Thought I feel maybe its was a bit to fast to make your definitive choice about the story? (even if it seem I personally kind of prefer this one and you seem to agree as you said you like to write it so i would say just go how you feel is the best in the end xD) but doing around 10 chapter for each was a bit better in my view before really choosing (atleast untill the basic framework for the plot and worldbuilding appear in each of them so we can have a 'real' what one we seem to prefer question, when too much is still blind and blank and it can still go any way, seem a bit premature to give a real opinion on them :) Well this one because of the genre and how its build would advance far faster on these aspects (framework of worldbuilding and plot) so I guess that why more people say first they can like it and prefer it and are pulled in this one between the two The other need a bit more time to show where it will goes, (well seem you really go for this one, but get the other stocked in the coffer for the future? seemed also plenty of potential with this one and with what was show untill now but still depend how it goes with it untill we have a better clear view of that)

Solarlancer

loving the story so far and I love his and Lola's reactions as they discover more and more about the universe. Looking forward to how the story develops.

RedLeaf

"Where is my empty universe indeed?" Thanks for the bonus chapter. Makes for a nice surprise.

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Mike

Ha, “where is my empty universe” liking this story more and more

Zac Jel

Awesome chapter


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