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Chapter 283 Dungeon Core: “The Eternal Training Ground”

🕑 Added 2025-01-29 17:47:13 +0000 UTC

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Apinsig

It's just solar flairs

ReadingObsessed

Arches on the sun? Is he taking solar flairs or something a bit more fantasy?

Zarik0

2 chapter per day for the last few days, author is in good shape :) Hmm a bit dissapointing that his new Eye Skill, is only seem to be Basic 'human' Vision, I expected that he get X Ray, infrared and etc, magic/mana vision, gravity vision/sense and etc all what he can perceive and know put into this skill, after how he talked when preparing for this skill... and how he is not limited to dumb limited mortal vision/perception in the first place Hope its because its subtext and he don't actually see like a poor human/mortal with it as of now, or that when it advance in rank he get additional vision/sense added to it + the standard improvement of his vision of previous rank each rank up I want some (way more) Pov or etc about how the different society and races of the dungeon start to meet and they discover (and shock or etc) what the others are and how their area/world/society/skills is And how it evolve too, as they start collaborating and also clash, a chapter or two with lots of multiple short Pov who give a 'recap'/review of a lots of different organisation/group/character of the dungeon and where and how they are now will not be bad too :) A chapter with MC pondering about his 'Statue' and all his different skills can be interesting too, a recap of it, and see his plan and view of it or seeing potentially what he can/will want to work (like patching hole or blind spot/weakness in his 'build' or just reaching for more potential in some subject/aspect that can be find lacking or interesting (maybe possible to consolidate some skill together (and they evolve/grow a little by doing that) Like in my mind, his Skill: Ever Expanding Creature Quantity with his Skill: Quantity Creature who is a basic skill of him, fusion of them and minimum grow in rank get some S or etc :P or extra effect/trait and etc of it when he fusion them and add a bit of energy? to it when doing it) If we start to move steadily towards the end, (i guess when MC is free of things and can continue is new exciting life with all new possibility and etc) I would like that for the Epilogue of it that we get some full 'Recap of everything', as the Dungeon remember everything who happened and how much happened, with some number o r etc, like its been X years for the begginning and X years between that and that happened at this moment, and we reached X number in the population at this moment/years and etc, a sort of recap point per point with interesting things put into it and hwo the dungeon feel about it, and also his long term view and plan for the new arc of his life who is coming now that this era ended

Zac Jel

POV of the dwarf/human worlds in the dungeon, dwarf queen meeting the dungeon born dwarfs would be kool

ben

The only thought I had on other POV's was to have them from even our allies when ETG did something monumental. They could be just a short little section, just to underwrite the horror/amazement/ incredulousness they are feeling.

Zac Jel

Great chapter

brennon Petersen

Tftc!


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