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Chapter 248 Dungeon Core: “The Eternal Training Ground”

🕑 Added 2024-11-14 15:17:08 +0000 UTC

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ItWasIDIO!!

I like Grandad

Apinsig

tnx words like that are really hard for me to tell apart

Michael Grover

She has just begun to serve a purpose. Do you forget. She is an expert on all things Dungeon. She was also never ment to be in danger as Ace said when she was grabbed.

fanfan8000

"about her being unarmed no matter what" It should be unharmed, same for the next paragraph as well. If its unarmed it means that she has been running around without weapons.

Blackpan2

Great chapter, it'd be nice if thefd was an adjective alongside "my granddaughter's voice" like strained, frantic, excited, desperate. Potentially to be addressed in the next chapter, but it would help share some insight into how Vivian is reacting and potentially indicate how her grandfather will proceed. Without the adjective it's a great cliff hanger though so I can see it being good either way

Zarik0

:))))))))) Aww i just want the next chapter now damnit !!

Thundermike00

Kill her! She served her purpose

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

RottenTangerine

Thanks for the chapter!


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