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Chapter 91 Dungeon Core: “The Eternal Training Ground”

🕑 Added 2024-01-03 17:04:07 +0000 UTC

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Zarik0

As it somewhat the first time he is threatened and outside things happenning can impact him greatly (talk with Ace about maybe death threat to Dungeon and etc) I think its time for MC that he ask to get atleast a general outlook of the outside world about the Movers of it (people and society) and how it function (rule/law/different continent and history of it and the different power into it and how it/they work and interact) and etc and what he need to pay attention and what is to come too (as he rank up people of high rank (and system/society of them) will start to come) No need to write everything but for now it just show he know nothing about it and seem to don't care at all about it, some attention after this event will be good, that he start gathering intel and etc and like when something of the outside come impact/influence thing or enter a discussion in the future chapter you can show he know about it (after a gathering of info of the world done in the background) (like: 'ah you talk about the X group who do X in the world and so we need to pay attention to X here in our local situation as they will do X here) So we know that he had done his homework and gathering of info (not like now when we see and know he know barely nothing and don't even pay attention and realize things about it) but you don't need to write it all or do a full overview of it when he start this gathering of info, just make it that he had done it in the background (or do a very large general overview) and so its stay a 'Open' worldbuilding for your future writing, so you can just add things as they come if they impact or etc Enter in the MC live in future chapter and here you need to add a line or two showing that he know about it (when they appear in the future) beforehand with his homework done (after this event) on what things are in the world and how they function

Milton Skipper

*snicker* why waste monsters just release the infernal fruit flies.

Robert

Have the ants not made magic shielding yet? The dungeon could chuck up a huge magic shield to protect the city , or maybe he wouldn't care as long as he and his entrance aren't threatened

Thundermike00

Something is going to go wrong, and the dungeon is going to come in to save the day. All the dungeon has to do is send out its millions of sliver rank monsters, and it can destroy many kingdoms


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