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Claire WIP layouts
🕑 Added 2025-01-12 10:36:21 +0000 UTCHere's the layouts for page 7! You can see these all start out VERY rough. I'm usually putting in dialogue at this stage to make certain the panels make sense. I refine much of the page in the pencils stage, starting with defined panel borders.
I don't know how much of this you guys care about, but I have a panel bleed off the edge of the page to create a sense of a wider area. Panel 3, Claire is looking for the front door, so I wanted to get a wider feel to the panel, hence a wide panel that bleeds off the page. Then it goes back to the action. This also separates preparation from action. I often use this method for realizations or just any sort of pause. It also helps with storytelling by creating a clean break between more complex panel separations. I always want clarity in my panel organization.
Just a little "inside baseball" there.
Comments
Fenris Comix
Thank you!
Daniel Lopez
Lol “very rough” and it just looks amazing but unfinished
Fenris Comix
Thank you!
vanB
Excellent
